ENG 123 1.2: Locating a Research Article

Today’s Plan:

  • Quick Hits
  • Reviewing summaries
  • Team formation
  • Searching in Summon, Google Scholar
  • Homework

A Few Quick Hits

What’s wrong with this sentence and how do we fix it?

In the article “Stress Training for Cops’ Brains Could Reduce Suspect Shootings”, it discusses the reaction the brain often has in stressful situations

Ok, similar one:

While reading, “Stress Training for Cops’ Brains Could Reduce Suspect Shootings (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site.”, we learn about how stress can aid or make certain situations deadly when cops are in active shooter or stressful situations. Rachel Nuwer, the author, begins with how stress is a survival instinct that has kept us alive for for centuries.

What’s wrong with the syntax of this sentence and how do we fix it?

Scientists have linked it to a specific type of pesticide, neonicotinoids. While agricultural businesses, such as DuPoint, say that the bees are being killed by mites.

Reviewing Summaries

Today we are going to start off with Cathy Davidson’s Think-Pair-Share method for generating discussion. Davidson describes:

In Think-Pair-Share, you hand out index cards and pencils (this is not necessary but it somehow sets the mood fast and fast is important in TPS). You set a timer for 90 seconds (really, 90). And you pose a question. For example, if this were a class on “Why Start With Pedagogy?” I would ask everyone to take 90 seconds to jot down three things (there are no right or wrong answers) they do in their classrooms to engage students. When the timer sounds, I then have students work in pairs for another 90 seconds in a very specific, ritualized way. Their objective in this 90 seconds is to, together, come up with one thing to share with the whole group, it can be a synthesis of various comments on both cards, but one agreed upon thing to share. BUT before that each person has to hear the other. One member of the pair reads their three things while the other is silent; then the second person reads to a silent listener. Hearing your own voice in a classroom—and witnessing being heard– is the beginning of taking responsibility for your own learning. It’s not only about meeting someone else’s criteria but setting the bar for yourself. There is also something about the ritual of writing down, then reading to someone else, that allows the introvert to speak up in a way that avoids the panic of being called on and having to speak extemp before a group. It is extremely egalitarian—it structures equality. The final 90 seconds involves going rapidly around the room and having one person in each pair read their contribution.

Here is your question: what is one thing that stood out in your article? Can you frame that thing in terms of a “Beef. It’s What’s for Dinner” meme (as in Noun. It’s what’s XYZ.)?

Team Formation

Ok, let’s see how this works out. To Google Docs!

Searching in Summon, Google Scholar

Once we have divided into teams of 3-4, I will ask each team to put together a list of 6 peer reviewed sources for their topic. If possible, each source should have a direct connection to the Scientific American article. How can you find sources? Try searching for any reports, researchers, articles, etc mentioned in the SA article. Let’s look at Summon and Google Scholar.

For instance, let’s say that I was working on Gillam’s Bees article. Scanning through it, I see a quote from Michele Simon, who Gillam describes as “a public health lawyer who specializes in food issues.” To Summon! To Google Scholar!

So what happens if I try Jeff Pettis? To the Google Doc!

Homework

For homework, I want you to dive into Mueller’s article “Mapping the Resourcefulness of Sources: A Worknet Pedagogy.” Remember to print out a copy.

Structurally, Mueller’s article is a typical humanities/pedagogy academic article (an article on teaching). It begins by laying out a problem and surveying previous research–focusing on research that is important for his “worknets” approach. In this case, the problem concerns student use of sources and the previous research is Marilyn Cooper’s work on writing ecologies (that writing is always connected to a network of cultural and social forces, it doesn’t exist in a vacuum). He also points to a few other theorists that follow or echo Cooper’s work: Sirc, Rice, Latour.

After the “Opening” section, the next few sections offer more theoretical support for his idea. That is, in order to teach sources in an “ecological way,” we have to have an idea of what ecology means both in general and as it pertains to writing. He begins by explicating Cooper a bit, then turns to Richard Lanham’ notion of “interfaces” to interrogate how current approach to source use are insufficient. His focus, as the section header suggests, is on prepositions.

Mueller writes:

[…]methodical approaches to source use are not so much lockstep processes of search, retrieval, selection, and integration, but rather routes across and beyond particular problems. Simply, methodical approaches to source use can become restrictive too early in an inquiry process if we understand source consultation and use as following too narrow or monolithic a set of procedures. When approaches to research writing tolerate stagnant or unquestioning operations, source integration risks turning into unchecked ritual–a flat but requisite gesture involving finding and slotting excerpts. In general, this is what I wish to avoid in my teaching of research-based writing. My intention is neither to abandon methodical approaches to source use nor to put too deeply in doubt rationalist sensibilities about the functions of sources in researched writing. Rather, worknets as an alternative framework may provide a complementary approach that supports writing conceived and carried out along “wiggyly paths or irregular courses.”

The remainder of the article articulates the four specific “wiggly paths” that comprise Mueller’s worknets: semantic, bibliographic, affinity-based, and choric.

I offer this layout to give you an inroad into understanding Mueller’s article. Before next Wednesday’s class, I’d like you to read Mueller’s article and post a 400 word summary to Canvas. The summary should:

  • What is Mueller’s issue with the way research is taught? What is his issue with Lunsford’s approach (since he points to her famous textbook as an example)?
  • Explain what theory grounds Mueller’s approach to worknets–what does he mean by ecology? What’s the deal with prepositions? Why call the four elements of the worknet “wiggly paths”?
  • Put the four elements of the worknet–semantic, bibliographic, affinity-based, and choric–into your own words.
  • Make sure you conclude by stressing how these four methods fix the problem that you/he articulates in the beginning! How is this different from Lunsford?
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ENG 329 1.1: Introduction (Assignment)

Today’s Plan:

  • Syllabus
  • Introduction Assignment
  • Google Form

Syllabus Review

Here is a link to the syllabus.

Introduction Assignment

For your first assignment, I’d like you to post a short video (30 seconds or less) that introduces you to the class. Perhaps you might begin by letting us know your major and career goals. But the focus of the video should be on sharing a part of your life that is important to you. It can be a place, a book, a food, an activity, anything you can film.

I don’t want anyone to worry about quality or freak out and drop the course! This is a way of me getting a sense of what you are capable of. In any course–but especially a course working with technology–it is a challenge to measure every student’s incoming abilities. This activity is meant to help me do just that.

A brief aside on the significance of imperfection.

Before you shoot your project, let’s spend a little time with Steve Stockman, author of How to Shoot Video that Doesn’t Suck. Stockman provides us with five basic principles for shooting video:

  • shots should be 10 seconds or less
  • Whites of their eyes (faces)
  • Light behind the camera, not behind the subject
  • Keep the camera still, don’t shoot and move
  • Keep your video short

If you are unsure what Stockman means by shots, maybe this will help.

Also, if you can, include some background music.

You can use any editor you want to make these videos, even iOS apps.

You should create a YouTube account and use the YouTube button in the discussion tools to embed your video into a discussion post. (Note try the embed, if you are having trouble then use a link).

Homework

There’s a discussion post on Canvas where you can upload your video (or, if you are having problems, you can submit a link).

In Wednesday’s class, I was going to spend 20 minutes or so going over some simple image editing in Photoshop. Please take this survey ASAP so I know what to include in the workshop.

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ENG 123 1.1: Introduction

Today’s Plan:

  • Syllabus
  • Article Overview
  • Homework

Syllabus

Let’s read the syllabus.

Choose Your Own Adventure

Here’s the list of articles:

Three sentences:

  • I read…
  • It was about…
  • One interesting, surprising, questionable thing was…

Quick Take: How to Read an (Academic) Article

When I assign a reading, I expect you to:

  1. Print out a copy of the article. Don’t try to read something on which you will write on screen
  2. As you read, have a pen at the ready. Don’t use a highlighter. Underline, mark the margin, or place a question mark as you go
  3. Every time you underline or mark the margin, write a comment at the top of the page. Studies show that writing things down helps us remember them. It also helps us start inventing the material we will need to write a summary or comparison. Don’t read passively, but actively

Homework

Read one of the articles above for Wednesday’s class. Post a 200 word summary of the article to Canvas. The summary should:

  • Identify the thesis of the article
  • Explain the methods the author used to support her claims and/or explain important methods used by others who the writer cites in support of her claims
  • Identify a debate, controversy, point of contention in the article
  • Not use the words “thesis” or “method(s)”

Bring a copy of your article to Wednesday’s class.

Note that we will meet in Ross Hall 1240 computer lab on Wednesday.

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ENG 594 13: Proposals, Digital Video

Tonight’s plan:

  • 123 Materials, Book Orders
  • Keri’s Paper
  • Proposals? Conferences?
  • Statement of Teaching Philosophy
  • Digital Video

Statements of Teaching Philosophy

Last week I explained my interest in helping you develop a teaching portfolio that will serve you on the job market. Let’s look at this pretty thorough guide on teaching portfolios developed by The Center for Teaching at Vanderbilt University. As I said last week, I think the feedback portfolio we developed last week is an innovative way of documenting teaching effectiveness.

Your other final assignment is pretty straightforward: and that is to develop a Statement of Teaching Philosophy. Obviously, you have limited experience as instructors, but I think it is strategic to familiarize yourself with the genre now so that you can revise these statements as you get closer to the job market (or applying to PhD programs).

Ok, what are statements of teaching philosophy? Let’s check that Vanderbilt page. Let’s look at the top of the Google Rankings.. Let’s look at Cheryl Ball’s advice. Let’s look at one more guide. Let’s look at some examples.

Teaching with Digital Video

Here is a link to the workshop I gave last year. Let’s walk through some stuff and then go make some video.

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ENG 122 12.2: Proposals, Conferences, Scholarship

Today’s plan:

  • Attendance
  • Index Card Questions
  • Conference Sign Up [Google Doc]
  • Proposal Assignment Review
  • MLA and APA Checklist
  • Survey and Interview Review
  • Booth exercise
  • Reading Scholarship
  • Homework

Conference Sign Up

Hi all. I’ve put up a Google Doc with meeting times. Sign up for one!

MLA and APA Checklist

So my feeling is that you have likely had exposure to MLA or APA paper formatting at some time. After the Thanksgiving Break, we will spend Tuesday working with the format. But I wanted you to format your proposals and drafts in MLA and APA format. To help with that, and to see what you already know, I’ve put together a checklist of primary concerns with MLA and APA. After you are done writing your proposal and your draft, please consult this and look up the formatting specifics (again, try Googling OWL MLA or APA).

Proposal Assignment

I was a bit off my game in the library Tuesday, so let me go over the proposal assignment one more time.

Proposal Project

The proposal for the final paper is a more focused than the proposal you wrote at the beginning of the semester. This time around I will ask you to hone in on a research question and provide me with an annotated list of sources that you will use in the final paper. On Thursday, I stipulated two requirements for the proposal:

  • That the paper pose a question that you do not already know the answer to (and you shouldn’t have a deep emotional investment in knowing the answer to–ask a question that might surprise you)
  • That the paper uses at least 8 sources. 2 of these sources should be academic, 3 of these sources must be academic if you want to qualify for an A

I have created a template for the proposal that I would like you all to use.

But before I share that with you, I want to explain something. I mentioned last week that you might conduct primary research: a questionnaire/survey, an interview, and experiment or observation, in place of some sources. You’ll notice an area in the template marked “primary research.” If you want to do primary research, then here is where you describe to me what you think you want to do. Essentially, I would like you to write up a methodology. If you want to do an interview, then find an interview on a similar subject, cite it, and use it to help develop the interview questions. I want to see those questions up front. Same thing with a survey–there’s readings for next class regarding surveys listed below.

If you develop and conduct a survey, then I will count it as two to three non-academic sources in your final paper (and I will specify the amount after I’ve read the proposal and during our conference).

Finally, you will notice that the proposal calls for an annotated bibliography of at least 5 sources. This means that by the time you turn in your annotated bibliography on Monday, I expect you to have read, summarized, and analyzed 5 sources. This might sound like a lot, but you should have already most of this work: you are drawing on an article you have already written that should have contained three sources (you should re-read those, but they are hopefully fresh), you read one source for homework in preparation for today’s class, and you are reading another source for homework tonight in preparation for Tuesday’s class.

Since I am asking you for an annotated bibliography, I want to clarify what I consider an annotation. I consider an annotation as a 150-250 word, two paragraph, thing. The first paragraph of an annotation provides the reader a summary of the piece. This summary should clarify when the piece was written, why the piece was written (what is its purpose, its thesis), the method or evidence the author of the piece uses to prove her point, and (possibly) what the author hopes the point will lead us to do differently (sometimes this is different than the thesis, sometimes it is the same thing).

The second paragraph of an annotation is more of a reflection on the significance of the piece to your project. Why is this source important to you? Does it help show that there is a problem? Does it critique a popular solution to the problem that you don’t think will work? Does it provide some meaningful statistics regarding what people think about the problem, or what people think about a proposed solution? Does it offer a unique perspective on why something is good? Or bad? Does it lay out survey questions that you would like to ask (maybe to see if you get the same answers, or different answers?)? In other words, the second paragraph is where you start thinking about the source and telling me how it fits into your project.

Survey and Interview Questions

Quick quiz on Canvas.

Booth Exercise

Quicker quiz on Canvas

Reading Scholarship

Let’s watch a quick video.

I’ve put together a handout that goes with the video. You are welcome to print more copies to use for your research or in other classes!

Homework

The next time we are going to meet as a group is on November 28th! Holy crap! There’s a lot to do between now and then, when we will work on MLA and APA format and do our course evaluations (the university requires you do them online, the English department provides paper forms). Let’s review:

  • November 13th, Proposal due
  • November 21st, Drafts of papers due for Peer Review (I will ask you to sumbit a link to a Google Doc, then I will email people and tell them which Google Doc to review–I will send out more information about this after conferences next week)
  • November 22nd, Drafts of papers due for Santos comments
  • November 28th, Meet in computer lab (Ross Hall) for MLA and APA workshop [DON’T MISS THIS CLASS]
  • November 30th, Meet in computer lab for MLA / APA and second peer review
  • December 3rd, Final papers due to be eligible for resubmission [note: resubmission is only possible if a draft was turned in on Nov 22nd]
  • December 8th, Absolute final day to turn in a paper
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ENG 594 12: Proposals, Feedback Portfolios, Paper Day #2

Today’s Plan:

  • ENG 123 update
  • Syllabus Review
  • Feedback Portfolios / Homework
  • Paper Day #2

ENG 123 Update

I’ve forwarded all of you the email I got from Sonja Scullion regarding English 123. It contains the syllabus and the supporting materials.

Syllabus Review

Here’s what I am doing for the next week or so.

First, in today’s class, I gave them a proposal project. I think of this as a pre-writing exercise, getting them to read, think, and write about their topic. My *hope* is that they really do ask a question that they don’t know the answer to, although many of them will overlook this requirement and seek a path of less resistance.

Thursday’s class will be busy for me. I’m in the computer lab that day. I will start off with the Booth activity (I am studying…). I will also pass around a sign-up sheet for 10 minute conferences next week; I’ll be cancelling class on Tuesday and Thursday. I wish I had one more class with them, because they will be essentially on their own with MLA and APA format until after Thanksgiving Break. Since you are all on the M/W/F format, I would cancel two days but use the third day productively.

Then, I have a quick quiz on those readings dealing with surveys and questionnaires (basically a reading check). I’ll probably get a bit political about what not to do. Then we are going to read an academic article together. Hey look, a worksheet to use in class. Hey look, an article to read together.

Well I remember: teaching MLA and APA. I have two activities I do. The first, as I’ve described, is to give them a horribly broken paper and tell them to fix it. I’ll provide a checklist of things so they know what to fix. That’s pretty much the same checklist I use to evaluate final papers. I don’t let them leave the computer lab until they are done.

A second exercise I’ve used is to bring in a pile of 10 sources–a mix of books, magazine articles, wikipedia entries (printed out), JSTOR pdfs (again, printed out but we pretend they are digital), etc. I break them into teams of two and have them create a Works Cited or Reference List from that material. I like this activity because it is tactile–they have the sources in their hand–and because I don’t necessarily do this one in a computer lab, they can’t rely on an attribution generator like EasyBib.

Feedback Portfolios / Homework

We have two remaining projects to complete this semester: the first is a Feedback Portfolio and the second is a Statement of Teaching Philosophy. I’m going to talk about the former today, and the later next week.

I’m going to be honest–I’ve never seen a “Feedback Portfolio” before. It was something I thought of this summer as I was putting together the readings for our course. I knew a number of readings would deal with assessment. I know from personal experience that it is easy to provide students with too much feedback (overwhelming them and reducing the chance that they follow up on our most important feedback). I know I sincerely believe that providing concise, actionable feedback in a timely manner is one of the best ways to helps students develop their abilities. So, I knew I wanted a project to focus intellectual energy on feedback. And I knew/know that I wanted you to end the course with materials that could help develop a teaching portfolio and help you with a future job search.

But I don’t know exactly what the feedback portfolio should include. I have a few ideas. But I am interested in hearing what you think. So, group time.

Let’s start here.

Paper Day #2

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12.1: Research and Proposals

Today’s Plan:

  • Library Research Presentation
  • Proposal Project
  • Homework

Proposal Project

In Thursday’s class you will sign up for meeting times with me next week. Before we meet, I will ask you to submit a final paper proposal. I would like these proposals to be completed by Monday, November 13th at 11:59pm. This is a bit of a change from the time line I laid out last Thursday while introducing the final papers:

  • November 14th, Proposal due
  • November 21st, Drafts of papers due for Peer Review
  • November 22nd, Drafts of papers due for Santos comments
  • December 3rd, Final papers due to be eligible for resubmission [note: resubmission is only possible if a draft was turned in on Nov 22nd]
  • December 8th, Absolute final day to turn in a paper

The proposal for the final paper is a more focused than the proposal you wrote at the beginning of the semester. This time around I will ask you to hone in on a research question and provide me with an annotated list of sources that you will use in the final paper. On Thursday, I stipulated two requirements for the proposal:

  • That the proposal pose a question that you do not already know the answer to (and you shouldn’t have a deep emotional investment in knowing the answer to–ask a question that might surprise you)
  • That the proposal uses at least 8 sources. 2 of these sources should be academic, 3 of these sources must be academic if you want to qualify for an A

I have created a template for the proposal that I would like you all to use.

But before I share that with you, I want to explain something. I mentioned last week that you might conduct primary research: a questionnaire/survey, an interview, and experiment or observation, in place of some sources. You’ll notice an area in the template marked “primary research.” If you want to do primary research, then here is where you describe to me what you think you want to do. Essentially, I would like you to write up a methodology. If you want to do an interview, then find an interview on a similar subject, cite it, and use it to help develop the interview questions. I want to see those questions up front. Same thing with a survey–there’s readings for next class regarding surveys listed below.

If you develop and conduct a survey, then I will count it as two to three non-academic sources in your final paper (and I will specify the amount after I’ve read the proposal and during our conference).

Finally, you will notice that the proposal calls for an annotated bibliography of at least 5 sources. This means that by the time you turn in your annotated bibliography on Monday, I expect you to have read, summarized, and analyzed 5 sources. This might sound like a lot, but you should have already most of this work: you are drawing on an article you have already written that should have contained three sources (you should re-read those, but they are hopefully fresh), you read one source for homework in preparation for today’s class, and you are reading another source for homework tonight in preparation for Tuesday’s class.

Since I am asking you for an annotated bibliography, I want to clarify what I consider an annotation. I consider an annotation as a 150-250 word, two paragraph, thing. The first paragraph of an annotation provides the reader a summary of the piece. This summary should clarify when the piece was written, why the piece was written (what is its purpose, its thesis), the method or evidence the author of the piece uses to prove her point, and (possibly) what the author hopes the point will lead us to do differently (sometimes this is different than the thesis, sometimes it is the same thing).

The second paragraph of an annotation is more of a reflection on the significance of the piece to your project. Why is this source important to you? Does it help show that there is a problem? Does it critique a popular solution to the problem that you don’t think will work? Does it provide some meaningful statistics regarding what people think about the problem, or what people think about a proposed solution? Does it offer a unique perspective on why something is good? Or bad? Does it lay out survey questions that you would like to ask (maybe to see if you get the same answers, or different answers?)? In other words, the second paragraph is where you start thinking about the source and telling me how it fits into your project.

Homework

There’s two (or maybe 3) things for homework:

  1. As a follow up to our library activity, find and annotate a peer-reviewed, academic source that you might use in your paper
  2. Read the following guides on constructing surveys (they are short): Harvard Guide, Purdue OWL question types to avoid. Also, be ready to tell me what a Likert scale is
  3. If you haven’t, read the Booth .pdf I shared on Thursday. Please read the text and come prepared to discuss it in Tuesday’s class. By “prepared,” I mean that you should have two points in the text that you think are significant and you are prepared to tell us why they are significant (obviously, significant can mean any number of things here). Furthermore, you should prepare one question to ask about the reading.
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ENG 122 11.2: Academic Research Papers

Today’s Plan:

  • Tuesday, November 7th: Meeting in Library
  • Quick Editing Quiz
  • Introduce Final Paper Assignment
  • Research Question Free Write
  • Research “Quiz”
  • Homework

Library

Your library instruction has been scheduled for 11/7 from 3:30-4:45pm in Michener Library room 335.

Final Paper Assignment

Our final month this semester will be dedicated to developing one of your medium.com essays into a longer academic research paper. These papers need to be argumentative–either evaluating something, proposing a solution to a problem, critiquing a proposed solution to a problem, or attempting to define something complex, debated, or ambiguous. We will work in class to help develop research questions that reflect a genuine argument (no strawmen, please). In fact, as I will stress today, I want your papers to start with an authentic research question–one you do not know the answer to.

The final paper is expected to be 1500-2000 words in length, not counting the title page and the works cited or reference page. These papers will be in MLA or APA formatting; the format should be determined by your major (while there’s a range of citation styles, we are only going to focus on two. Use MLA if you are majoring in a humanity and APA if you are majoring in a science). Papers should use at least two academic, peer-reviewed sources. Papers striving for an “A” should use 3. Papers are expected to use a total of 8 sources, although this number is negotiable depending on the nature of your project and how much summation, explication, analysis, and/or critique you dedicate to a source. I will have you write a proposal in which you identify which sources you will use to illustrate your problem, and which sources help you develop a solution.

We will have a session in the library to help familiarize you with resources to find academic sources. Academic sources can be difficult to read, so we will work on how to navigate peer-reviewed scholarship in class. But our work this semester on attributing sources and working with other people’s ideas should help you integrate academic research into your argument. Academic formats have precise rules for citing sources, formatting quotes, and composing works cited/reference lists, but the basic semantic principles for bringing evidence into an argument transcend the specific requirements of any reference system.

Some of you might find it difficult to imagine how academic, peer-reviewed scholarship might contribute to your work. I can help! If you are working on a project that doesn’t seem “academic,” then talk to me and we can figure out how to proceed. Furthermore, some projects might benefit from conducting primary research, be it in the form of a survey, questionnaire, observation, interview, etc.
If you think your project would benefit from primary research, then we can discuss how many of the 8 required sources your research will replace.

We will work in the computer lab to develop a proposal for a final paper. Then we will meet in the library and you will try and find academic sources to integrate into your paper. You will sign up for a one-on-one conference with me as you are working on your rough draft. We will peer review rough drafts in progress before Thanksgiving. Polished rough drafts will be due the Wednesday before Thanksgiving; I will provide feedback over the break. Both before and after the break we will work on MLA and APA conventions in class, as well as examine the typical arrangement of longer academic papers.

Final papers submitted on or before December 3rd will be graded and returned by Tuesday December 5th. Students who 1) submit a draft of the paper before Thanksgiving and submit the revised final by December 3rd will have the option of revising the paper and re-submitting it for a final grade. The super-final due date for papers is Friday December 8th. Note that papers received after December 3rd will be graded without comments.

Dates:

  • November 14th, Proposal due [I will give formal instructions for the proposal on Tuesday]
  • November 21st, Drafts of papers due for Peer Review
  • November 22nd, Drafts of papers due for Santos comments
  • December 3rd, Final papers due to be eligible for resubmission [note: resubmission is only possible if a draft was turned in on Nov 22nd]
  • December 8th, Absolute final day to turn in a paper

Homework

I have emailed out a .pdf from Booth’s Craft of Research. Please read the text and come prepared to discuss it in Tuesday’s class. By “prepared,” I mean that you should have two points in the text that you think are significant and you are prepared to tell us why they are significant (obviously, significant can mean any number of things here). Furthermore, you should prepare one question to ask about the reading.

Also, there is a discussion in Canvas called “Final Paper Research.” Please read one thing that can contribute to your final paper and write a summary and response to it there.

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ENG 594 10: Looking Ahead (this semester, next semester)

Today’s Plan:

  • How Goes It?
  • Reading Review: Inuoe and Shipka
  • Review 122 Syllabus Exercise
  • Examine 123 Syllabi
  • Break
  • Syllabus Review
  • Reminder: No Class Next Week
  • Homework: Reading and Paper Day #2

Syllabus Review

Wednesday October 25th: In the computer lab. In the past I have done a workshop that focuses on sentences from the draft that introduce evidence. This time I’m workshopping drafts on both Tuesday and Thursday this week to make sure that everyone has workshopped something before we get to the final paper.

Friday October 27th: Peer Review Draft #4. Homework: I’ve made a .pdf of the Booth reading that I use to help students think about a topic for the final paper. Let’s look at that.. and see below).

Monday October 30th: After working through the Booth, I will have them develop a research sentence built around one of their papers (ie, which one do they want to expand into a final paper?). I will set up a Canvas discussion forum and have them submit two potential Booth sentences.

Wednesday November 1st: Computer Lab. We will go over the Booth sentences. I think it is worth taking a class period to examining these one by one, asking them what they think, and having them listen to how I respond to everyone’s topics. Homework: After discussing in class, write me a paragraph that explains what your topic is and what research you need to do.

Friday November 3rd: Library Day / Open Date. Homework: Canvas–write two paragraphs to introduce sources you will use for the final paper. At least one of these sources should be an academic, peer reviewed source

Monday November 6th: Library Day / Open Date. Homework: Canvas–write two paragraphs to introduce sources you will use for the final paper. At least one of these sources should be an academic, peer reviewed source.

Make sure you sign up for a library workshop. (Library instruction request form).

In terms of the open date, let’s take a look at the syllabus. I am tempted to do that day in the computer lab and do my MLA/APA workshop.

Things to Focus on in the Booth Reading:

  • Pages 20-22, your relationship to your reader
  • Page 30, dealing with inexperience (Burke’s Parlor)
  • Pages 14-15, finding a topic in four parts
  • Page 41, 3.1, from an interest to a topic
  • Page 43, 3.2, from a broad topic to a focused one with four key terms: conflict, description, contribution, development
    • How does X’s description of Y differ from A, B, and C?
    • How could X contribute to our understanding of Y?
    • How has understanding of X developed over time?
    • How does X’s understanding of Y differ from Z’s understanding?
    • What are 3 different ways of fixing X problem?
    • Why people who care about X need to start doing Y
  • Page 45, Page 49: make sure you ask a question worth answering
  • Page 52, one sentence, three blanks:
    • I am studying…
    • Because I want to find out…
    • in order to help my reader better understand…

Homework

Because I want to make sure there is enough time at the end of the year for you to focus on syllabi for next semester, putting together a feedback portfolio, and producing a teaching philosophy, I think it is time to finish with our course readings and compose the second Paper Day paper.

I have two readings I want you to do before writing your final paper. Both deal with the “future” of composition. The first is Geof Sirc’s piece “Serial Composition” and the other Kathleen Yancey’s piece “Composition in a New Key.” Dedicate a portion of your final paper to thinking about the role of non-traditional/multimedia composition in ENG 122 (Sirc, Yancey, Shipka). We have also spent time thinking about politics in the classroom and assessment–I leave it to you to figure out how to navigate those discussions.

I also want your paper to engage Inoue.

Additionally, you should engage a few of the readings below:

  • Inuoe, Anti-Racist Writing Assessment
  • Shipka, “Negotiating Rhetorical, Technological, and Methodological Difference”
  • Elbow and Danielewicz, “A Unilateral Grading Contract to Improve Learning and Teaching”
  • Hairston, “Diversity, Ideology, and Teaching Writing”
  • Berlin, “Rhetoric and Ideology in the Writing Class”
  • Kopelson, “Rhetoric on the Edge of Cunning; Or, the Performance of Neutrality (Re)Considered as aComposition Pedagogy for Student Resistance”
  • Rickert, “Hands Up! You’re Free”
  • Lynch, “The Cultivation of Naivete”

Although he appeared in our first set of readings, I’ve also included Lynch above. I think, after our work on assessment, it might be worth it to return to his discussion of method, reflection, and change.

I am genuinely curious to see what connections you make here. Can we find a connection between Elbow and Danielewicz’s notion of grading contracts and Rickert’s theory of student resistance, cynicism, and institutional power? Does Inuoe’s explicit approach to structural racism and assessment contradict Kopelson’s theory of cunning–or is there a way to read them as complementary? Does Shipka’s rhetorical approach to composition align with Hairston’s “narrow” view of teaching writing? These are just a few questions that could bring you into thinking through these texts. My main interest, as you move toward writing your teaching philosophy, is to start identifying what theoretical positions (in both this set of readings and our readings from earlier in the course) ground your approach to pedagogy and curriculum.

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ENG 594 9: Antiracist Writing Assessment

Today’s Plan:

  • Quick Reading: Inoue’s grading contract
  • Assessment Exercise
  • Discussion: Inoue
  • Break
  • Syllabus Review
  • Paper 3 Final List (let’s just add final 2 and 3 together)
  • Homework

Exercise

After we have read the grading contract, I would like you to break into groups of two. Groups should discuss the following talking points:

  • What elements of our course line up with Inoue’s prescriptions for an anitracist writing class?
  • What elements of our course don’t line up with Inoue’s prescriptions for an antiracist writing class?
  • After reading Inoue, what is one thing you will change the next time you teach this class (or even something you will change this semester)
  • Do you think eng 122 could work if it awarded grades based on *labor* and not *quality*?

I’ll give everyone 20 minutes to discuss each of these talking points, then we will reconvene and compare answers.

Inoue Discussion Points

  • How does structural racism show up in writing assessment? To what evidence does Inuoe point?
  • Pg 9. Assessment & pedagogy
  • Seven elements of assessment:
    • Power (questions for students p. 123)(power, in light of Foucault, explicit p. 125)
    • Parts (artifacts, intro labor p.128, counter arguments to labor p. 131)
    • Purposes (negotiate explicit purposes p. 134, from grading, ranking, evaluating to description, response, dialogue [reflection]
      p. 135)
    • People (people reflecting treat people like people pg. 141, suggested texts, pg. 141, student counterarguments to labor pg. 144, how place shapes performance/being-as pg. 147, student desire for grammar 149,
    • Processes (why post-process leads to labor over evaluation 153, anticipating teacher resistance to labor 153, how to make labor visible,
    • Products (portfolio evaluation & how grades as labor changes feedback 156,
    • Places (interesting angle on public assessment and de-individualization 160, “learning requires us to be uncomfortable and safe” 165, borderlands to challenge hegemony 166, 170-171, more questions for students 171
  • Activities (not assignments)
    • Reading
    • Writing
    • Reflecting
    • Labor Journaling
    • Assessing
    • Projecting
  • Sample rubrics (221)
  • Heuristic 284-291

Syllabus Review

We really only have one day to worry about, and that is Monday October 23rd. On the original syllabus, we were slated to work on “Pathos and Apology.” Reviewing those course notes, I’m not sure that is one that will fit into this course–it worked really well when students were writing blog-like posts each week. It doesn’t really work as a medium.com essay.

So that leaves us with what amounts to an open day. I can’t imagine that it will be too difficult to fill–we have the Williams and Bizup article that we can use. You might still have not done the analogy workshop. There’s the logical fallacy workshop. You can always do more work on logical fallacies (maybe a quiz like this and/or this). If you have had your fill of logical fallacies and analogies, then you could do some kind of revision activity with the final papers. If you want to start thinking ahead to the final paper, then you might help them read an academic article (how to find a thesis, how to identify a literature review, looking at methodology (in humanities this might mean what theorists are central to the argument, in sciences this is probably a more “traditional” methods section). If you do this exercise, then I would pick one humanities article and one science article to work with. Do an article you are comfortable with, one you have command of, one you have to read for one of your classes. You could even contrast the Elbow and Danielewicz I’m asking you to read for homework with this qualitative article on grading contracts.

Paper 3 Final List

Let’s combine the Paper 2 finals and the Paper 3 finals into one list. I also want to talk a bit about moving toward the final paper and how we can use the medium drafts to help facilitate that process.

Homework

For next class, please prepare a 122 syllabus for how you would teach the course the next time you are assigned it. You do not have to include a calendar. I would like you to include a grading contract, although you have freedom to make that contract whatever you wish.

Readings for next class:

  • Shipka, “Negotiating Rhetorical, Technological, and Methodological Difference”
  • Elbow and Danielewicz, “A Unilateral Grading Contract to Improve Learning and Teaching”
  • Inoue, TBD
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