ENG 201 10.R: Catching Up and Moving On

Today’s Plan:

  • Email Address
  • Rest of Year Calendar
  • Group Updates
  • Today: Rock Found Phase #1 Memo
  • Thursday Nov 14: Rock Found Phase #1 Progress Presentations
  • Trick or Tweet Time!

Rest of Year Schedule

Here’s what I am thinking.

Week 11 (Nov 5, 7)

  • Tuesday: Rock Found work day.
  • Thursday: Computer Lab: Visual Rhetoric crash course. Introduction to HTML. Bring a Microsoft Word copy of a resume to class.

Week 12 (Nov 12, 14)

  • Tuesday: Let’s talk resumes. Rock Found Work Day.
  • Thursday: Rock Found Phase One Team Presentations

Week 13 (Nov 19, 21)

  • Tuesday: Resume Review. Let’s Talk Cover Letters. Rock Found Work Day.
  • Thursday: Computer Lab: Working in Google Sites. Working in Linkedin.

Week 14 (26, 28)

  • Tuesday: Rock Found Work Day.
  • Thursday: Thanksgiving

Week 15 (Dec 3, 5)

  • Tuesday: Cover Letter Peer Reviews.
  • Thursday: Final Rock Found Share Day. Course Evaluations.

Week 16 (Dec 10, 12)

  • Tuesday: No class. Meet with me to talk about job materials.
  • Thursday: No class. Meet with me to share and talk about job materials.

Email Address

I have created an email address for our project. It is rockfound201@gmail.com. I have a password that I will distribute when necessary. We will use this email address to create any accounts we need (twitter, snapchat, etc). Also, we can use this email account for any grant writing needs.

Group Updates

Let’s take a quick look.

Rock Found Phase #1 Memo

As I indicate on our rest-of-year schedule, I want to complete Phase 1 of our Rock Foundation project on Thursday, November 14th (two weeks from today). I need to know what groups believe they can reasonably complete between now and then. This is something of a negotiation. I have thrown out some estimates, now tell me if they are reasonable. To facilitate this negotiation, I have developed a memo template for you to complete with your classmates in class today. Make a copy of this template and share it with insignificantwrangler@gmail.com. Yes, that is my email address from grad school. It is my snarky response to a pretentious Jon Locke quote dismissing rhetoric. Fuck him.

As you see, the memo involves documenting who will be responsible for what parts of the project. Because teamwork. And in preparation.

My hope is that you can complete this memo in class today. Before you do, let’s talk presentations.

Thursday Nov 14: Rock Found Phase #1 Progress Presentations

I am setting aside class on November 14th for each group to present their Phase 1 progress. Presentations should be 7 minutes (not 6 minutes, not 8 minutes, but 7 minutes). Presentations should be rehearsed–concision is important. Presentations should be accompanied by a Google Slides show.

Presentations should summarize what progress you have made (say 5 minutes) and tell us where you see the group going next (2 minutes). This might be harder for the research group–essentially, you should give us some mini-presentations that synthesize research. That is, don’t tell me about one article at a time. Break the articles into topics/ideas/areas of concern and address those across articles. We can talk more about this. Make sure you include presentation preparation work in your memo!

For Next Class

I shouldn’t need to tell you what to do.

BUT: Next Thursday we will be meeting in the computer lab for class. You need to bring a Word Document resume to class.

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ENG 229 10.R: Catching Up and Moving Foward

Today’s Plan:

  • Review the Kalman Project
  • LAC Interview Project is Taking Shape
  • Reviewing the Interview Projects
  • Rest of Year Schedule

Kalman Project

Just a quick review.

The Kalman project should reflect all of our previous work on cinematography.

  • Shot length
  • Opening shot
  • Sequence grammar (wide, mid, close, mid)
  • Lighting / use of contrast
  • Color
  • Rule of thirds
  • Head room
  • Montage

Additionally, I’d like you to layer multiple audio layers:

  • Dialogue / Narration
  • Wild sounds and/or ambient sounds (see Scrhoeppel)
  • Music (intro? outro? montage?)

Rest of Year Schedule

Here’s what I am thinking.

Week 11 (Nov 5, 7)

  • Tuesday: Reviewing Interview Set Up / Working with Sound
  • Thursday: Tell us About Where You Will Do Your Kalman (Canvas
    Discussion: Kalman Project Preliminary Research)

Week 12 (Nov 12, 14)

  • Tuesday: Interview Opening Credits Competition and Music Selection
  • Thursday: Interview Opening Credits Competition

Week 13 (Nov 19, 21)

  • Tuesday: TBD (Hopefully recording / revising interviews)
  • Thursday: TBD (Hopefully recording / revising interviews)

Week 14 (26, 28)

  • Tuesday: Complete Promotional Video Project(uploaded to google drive folder by 2pm)
  • Thursday: Thanksgiving

Week 15 (Dec 3, 5)

  • Tuesday: Work Day (Kalman)
  • Thursday: Course Review. Kalman Postmortem Assignment.

Week 16 (Dec 10, 12)

  • Tuesday: Kalman Watch Party
  • Thursday: No Class
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ENG 319 10.R: Catching Up and Moving Forward

Today’s Plan:

  • Trick or Tweet Halloween Contest
  • Schedule
  • Reviewing the Annotated Bibliography
  • For Next Class

Trick or Tweet Contest

I’d like to see more entries! And more follows. Let’s take 5 minutes.

Schedule

Week 11 (Nov 5, 7)

  • Tuesday: Review second wave of research annotations. Outline course evaluation project.
  • Thursday: Ross Computer Lab. Lecture: Developing Survey Questions. Work: Design / Develop potential course evaluation procedure. Weekend homework: read Roberts-Miller. Complete Canvas assignment.

Week 12 (Nov 12, 14)

  • Tuesday: Discuss Roberts-Miller. Homework: complete
  • Thursday: Ross Computer Lab. Continue to develop course evaluation procedures.

Week 13 (Nov 19, 21)

  • Tuesday: Peer review team assessment materials. Revise materials for Thursday. Organize course eval groups/responses.
  • Thursday: Do course evaluations.

Week 14 (26, 28)

  • Tuesday: Meet to synthesize course evaluation research. Lay out recommendation letter assignments. Thanksgiving break homework: Draft recommendation letter.
  • Thursday: Thanksgiving

Week 15 (Dec 3, 5)

  • Tuesday: Share recommendation letters. Revise recommendation letters.
  • Thursday: Work on letter recommendations.

Week 16 Exam Week (Dec 10, 12)

  • Tuesday: Meet to share recommendation letters.
  • Thursday: No class. Extra Credit assignments are due Saturday at midnight.

Extra Credit assignment

Originally I imagined us working on two assignments for these last few weeks. This no longer seems feasible for two reasons: first, I gave us an extra week and a half on the What is Rhetoric? paper. Second, the course evaluation project maps out to be a bit more work than I expected.

But I did have you purchase two books–the Roberts-Miller and the Snyder–and I don’t want to make that purchase a waste.

The calendar still involves a Roberts-Miller assignment. That’s on there for two reasons. First, I think it is especially important that Americans are aware of the threat of authoritarianism–both our desire for it and our slide towards it. Democracy and Demagoguery is a short book that needs to be read and discussed. Second, I want to offer two options for an extra-credit assignment.

  • Option One: A rhetorical analysis of a politician’s 2020 campaign materials. These materials would include: their website and one campaign speech (look on youtube.com). You would build a lens for this analysis using Roberts-Miller: what components of their materials speak to what she identifies as “democracy.” What might be considered as elements of “demagoguery”?
  • Option Two: A compare/contrast analysis that puts Miller and Snyder in conversation with each other. What idea(s) do they share? Where might they differ? Even where they have similarities, do they have different priorities? Alternatively, can you put one idea that appears in both Miller and Snyder in conversation with one of our classical greek (or contemporary) rhetorical theorists?

I would expect either of these papers to check in around 4-5 pages double-spaced. The rhetorical analysis paper could easily I am more than willing to talk to anyone who wants to complete one of these projects in office hours (we can set up an appointment). Just email me if you want more details.

As the schedule above indicates, I can except these papers up until Saturday after exam week (Dec 14th) at midnight.

Reviewing the Annotated Bibliography

Get with your partner(s) for 5 minutes. Tell us what you learned.

Homework

For next class: a second wave of research annotations.

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ENG 9.T: What is a Grant Application?

Today’s Plan:

  • Review Team Assignments
  • What Do We Know About Grant Writing?
  • Analyzing a Grant Application
  • For Next Class

Review Team Assignments

Let’s check them out.

What Do We Know About Grant Writing?

I preparation for today’s class I asked you to read Lesson 6 and 7 of Karsh and Fox’s Grant Writing Book. Those rules are:

  • Make an Outline
  • Write as you Speak
    • Don’t be overly formal or pretentious
    • Don’t be too casual
    • Be clear, direct, factual
  • Double and Triple Think Your Choice of Words
    • Avoid all slang
    • “We also believe you must take great care in describing, precisely, the traits and attributes of the people who participate in your program and/or who live in your community or city” (123-24)
  • Don’t Exaggerate
    • Avoid hyperbolic adjectives (the best, cutting edge, etc)
    • Let facts speak for themselves
  • Buy a Grammar Book
    • Double check EVERY apostrophe
    • Double check EVERY comma
    • Double check every verb for a tense shift
    • Double check every introductory clause for agreement (“While riding a bus, the tornado ripped through our town”)
  • Buy a Dictionary and a Thesaurus
    • It is helpful to explore the precise meaning of terms and avoid too much repetition
    • LET ME EXERCISE CAUTION
  • Stick to the Active Voice
    • Williams and Bizup every sentence
  • Keep Your Own Voice Out of It
    • Avoid judgments, controversial ideas, political views, and humor
    • NO. SARCASM.
  • Limit the Adjectives
  • It’s Not Personal
    • When possible, avoid I, we, and our in favor of specific references
  • NO ACRONYMS
  • Prove It!
    • Evidence-based claims

To this list we can add a few of the driving ideas in Lesson 7: that a grant emphasize how it offers a solution to a problem or a strategy to address a particular need (pg. 139). Describe a clear target population (pg. 142). Have a sufficient but no overwhelming amount of research (pg. 145-146). What kinds of material can be considered research?

  • Community demographics
  • Anecdotal Information (“Can put a human face on a cold statistical problem”)
  • Focus Groups
  • Needs assessment [major project]
  • Newspaper reports
  • Police Precinct Data
  • School reading/math/attendance rates
  • Hospital and health department statistics
  • Scholarly Literature

Analyzing a Grant Application

Let’s put that rubric to work.

For Next Class

Grant Team: Our library has links/subscriptions to a number of useful services. It is time to divide and conquer. We need to dive into this SPIN database and see what we can dig up. Give me 45 minutes of your time.

Here’s one more thing we might want to examine, the Council of Foundations

.

Peer Organizations Team: First, we need a list of organizations that work in re-entry, restorative justice, rehabilitation, etc. Let’s work on that. There’s a search engine for that. How many terms can we think off? How can we split up this work? Give me 45 minutes of your time, too.

Research Team: We need to generate a list of potential research articles. I have loosely organized our document by topic. Let’s put together a list of articles useful for our grant projects.

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ENG 229 8.T: Interviews, Premiere: Moving Objects, Kalman Project

Today’s Plan

  • Interviews
  • Kalman
  • For next class

Interview Check In

Your two-camera interviews are due next Tuesday. Questions? Concerns? Anyone without a group?

Remember the criteria I am using to grade these projects:

  • This project needs to be 55 seconds to 1 minute long
  • This project needs a 6 second introduction that includes an opening shot outside of the interview location, a b-roll montage, a title, and some intro music that fades out. BONUS: Your title moves.
  • This project needs to include text identifying participants
  • This project needs one longer response that uses a J or L cut

Moving Objects in Adobe Premiere Using Keyframes

Today we are going to be following this simple tutorial for moving objects in Adobe Premiere. I’ve emailed out a photo of a kangaroo and a desert. After we finish the kangaroo and the desert, we’ll work with moving a title on and off the screen.

First, we need to make sure that video keyframes are visible on the timeline.

Make the bear run.

Make a title slide in.

Make a title fade out.

Make a title fade in.

Make a title scale in.

Kalman Project

I’m not sure how much time we have left today. I’m going to draft up a lecture here aiming to introduce our next project, what I affectionately call the Kalman project. I’ve written about this project, and it remains one of my favorite to teach. But I usually teach it embedded in a course on digital rhetoric: one in which we spend a semester analyzing how different communicative technologies (re)shape the ways humans conceive of themselves (subjectivity, what does it mean to be a self?), their world (ontology, what is reality?), knowledge (epistemology, what *is* the nature of knowledge), and the ways they relate to each other (ethics, or how we act–which is sometimes different then morality, or the study of how we think we *should* act). Rhetoric, as I teach it, concerns all of these things–it is an attempt to understand (analyze) and improve (actually do stuff) human communication and community. Rhetoric isn’t merely the study of persuasion in a direct sense, it is also the study of why we are resistant to change, why we shrink back at alterity/otherness, and how we can be better (to ourselves, our communities, our futures). There’s too much for me to say about this subject in one paragraph.

Apparatus theory is the name Gregory Ulmer gave to the study of how different technologies (re)shape us. Much of this work traces back to Walter Ong. I teach Ong in a lot of my other classes and have a stock lecture on him. Ong argues that “writing is a technology that restructures thought.” That’s the name of the very useful essay he wrote near the end of his career that attempts to sum up decades of reading and theorizing. It is a useful essay. Let’s examine it quickly.

In the essay, Ong traces out a few dozen effects that literacy has on human consciousness. Most of these things can be summarized as a few criteria:

  • Literacy emphasizes the abstract. Words are divorced from reality. Words target elements of a holistically experienced reality and parcel them.
  • Literacy individualizes. When I speak to you as a class, you are a group. When I ask you to read something on the screen, you become individuals. Writing is, most often, a solitary activity. Reading, after, say, 2nd grade, is almost entirely an individual activity (note that I increasingly think this is wrong and college classes should read challenging texts together because something viral and kinetic and awesome happens when you do. And you should totally read books out loud to the people you love). Side notes. Writing and reading are far more individualistic than speech.
  • Literacy emphasizes logos. [Sigh, I hate talking about rhetoric as ethos, pathos, and logos, but here goes]

When I was writing my dissertation a decade ago, I was one of many scholars prompted by Ong’s work to think about how the Internet might change metaphysics, ontology, epistemology, ethics, etc. I was thinking particularly of Wikipedia, and argued that we would move away from singularity, autonomy, permanence,
and certainty and toward plurality, interactivity, transience, and risk/ambiguity. I like Marshal McLuhan and Gregory Ulmer and Elizabeth Eisenstein and others, was interested in how technology was reshaping the way we are–all those things I list above. If Ong is right, and literacy instigated such massive shifts in humans, then what would all this digital stuff do? At the time I was thinking about the Internet. This class we are going to think a bit about video.

My operating hypothesis is that video amplifies pathos (I’m stealing this from Marshall McLuhan, that video is more immediate than print; Ulmer has a whole thing on “flash reason,” putting the enthymeme in meme). In general use, the terms affect, emotion, and mood tend to be interchangeable. But in psychology–and by extension across the humanities–affect is different from emotion. Emotion is something that I know I feel. I can articulate it. I am consciously aware of it. For instance, I am sad.

Affect is different, however. It points to how “I” feel before I know how I feel. It is the feeling emanating through my body and influencing my consciousness. Affect affects how I exist in the world at a given time. This notion of affect I am developing resonates with Heidegger’s phenomenology–that our experience of our own being occurs within the bounds of a particular, but often inarticulable, mood.

In Rhetoric, studies of affect explore how places and spaces can subtly influence our moods. Thomas Rickert refers to this as attending to ambience: how space influences affect/feelings and thus structures or influences our experiences. One might be familiar with the derive of Situationalist International from the 1950’s and 1960’s. This semester I am interested in you exploring the subjective, affective experience of a place. The nature of this exploration can vary greatly depending on the place you explore. For instance, a few years ago I visited the African American museum in Atlanta, and it was clear that the place was designed to provoke an incredible affective and pathetic (unconscious and conscious) emotional experience. Other places might provoke a strong affective experience even thought they were not consciously designed to do so.

I don’t want you to rush and think about a place yet. First we need to read Kalman, because this project will be an attempt to translate her aesthetic into video. Her aesthetic is rather unique. Let’s listen.

For Next Class

For next class, I’d like you to read the chapters on January (“Inauguaration at last“) and April.

Our goal is, to quote the poet Robert Pinsky, “to read like a good chef eats.” That is: I will be asking you to “make me a Kalman that is not a Kalman.” To do this, you first must have a clear understanding of what a Kalman is. I will not tell you this. At least, I will not tell you this until you have told me what you think it is. I have a clear idea of what I think a Kalman is. But I won’t tell you. BUT this isn’t a shell game. I will not assess your work on whether you get MY idea of a Kalman right. I will assess your work on whether you present a notion of Kalman that resonates with her work. Can you defend your idea of a Kalman?

As professional writers, you will often be in a situation in which you have to create something. Sometimes this will be a readily available genre. Teaching you how to do that is not what this project is about.

Those of you who have taken ENG 201 with me know how many job ads call for creativity and independence. I have written several articles arguing that developing student creativity requires we put students in “disequilibriating” experiences; we have to “unschool” you. School is where I tell you what to do and how to do it, and then assess whether you can follow my directions. That is not what I think learning is. Rather, I think learning happens when I challenge you to do something and then give you feedback on how well you are negotiating all the elements of the challenge. Cicero once said: “the greatest impediment to those who want to learn is those who want to teach.”

You can do this.

To start doing this, read the Kalman and make a list of five ingredients you would need to make a Kalman. Think of a recipe. What do we need? What do we need to do? What is the equivalent of baking at 350 degrees?

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ENG 319 8.T: Rethinking Isocrates, Spontaneous Rhetorical Analysis, University in Ruins

Today’s Plan:

  • Isocrates
  • Let’s Try Something
  • Bill Readings
  • For Next Class

Isocrates

One thing that I’ve realized teaching these texts this semester: Isocrates provides the clearest example of the strong defense that we can find in the ancient world. Here is an amended thread from my last round of feedback. Consider this my best attempt at writing my rough draft.

I see what you are doing here. But I’m not sure I agree with the idea that Isocrates represents the weak defense here, nor that Haskins is accusing him of doing so. Haskins is arguing for the practical nature of Isocrates’ approach–that we become good people by trying to do good things in public. What happens when we argue about things in public?

I’m thinking of a particular passage from Isocrates here, one in which he directly confronts Plato’s accusation that sophist rhetoricians claim they can ensure the moral righteousness of their students:

I consider that kind of art which can implant honesty and justice in depraved natures has never existed and does not know exist, and that people who profess that power will grow weary and cease from their vain pretensions before such an education is ever found. But I do hold that people can become better and worthier if they conceive an ambition to speak well, if they become possessed of the desire to be able to persuade their hearers, and, finally, if they set their hearts on seizing their advantage. (Antidosis, 337)

Okay, first, those opening sentences sound to me like he isn’t skirting the Q Question, rather, he’s admitting straight out that no course of study can ensure moral righteousness. This is a direct response how Plato’s Socrates attacks Gorgias: that the latter, because he does not study moral knowledge, cannot possibly ensure that he teaches a “dangerous” art like rhetoric to good people. In the dialogue, Gorgias argues that he can ensure the moral righteousness of his students; McComiskey persuasively argues that the historical Gorgias would never make this argument. I would argue that the historical Gorgias likely would have made the argument made here by his pupil.

Second, notice how his rebuttal, “But I do hold…” places emphasis on learning to work with people (persuading). To answer my question above: when we aim to persuade people, we have to work with them. We have to respect them and their authority. When we think of truth/knowledge in line with McComiskey’s Gorgias and relativistic epistemology, Jarratt’s conception of nomos, Isocrates’ notion of the polis, and/or Lanham’s strong defense which sees truth as the result of social dramas, then we recognize that the fate of our proposed truth is in the hands of the other(s). We cannot control what will be(come) of our worlds/whirls of language (to paraphrase Vitanza).

So, again, why does Isocrates think this makes us a good person? Because when we seek cooperation we approach people in a more open (Corder might call it) spirit. There are seeds of this in Aristotle’s idea that the ethos of the speaker is inherent in their speech. Do they seem fair minded–which I interpret as “did they spend enough time and sincere effort learning their opponent’s position, or do they turn their opponent into a strawman and/or boogeyman?” But beyond what emerges in the speech, there is the more tricky question of whether they approach discussion and debate with the kind of productive hesitancy that Jim Corder describes. Insert long explication of Corder here, on the necessity of learning how to be more open.

But also something else beyond this ethical transformation, this implicit framing of how people dedicated to civic cooperation comport themselves. I said last class, responding to someone else’s paper, that there’s a difference when we think of individual vs. social knowledge (episteme vs nomos/doxa). Isocrates isn’t interested in what I know or what you know but rather what we collectively know. And we can measure what we collectively know by paying attention to what we do. Knowledge that doesn’t lead to action is just intellectual masturbation. He would have us consummate. (Sorry, sorry).

I think this becomes clearest in Isocrates’ explication of the term “advantage.” What does he mean by advantage. He specifically does not mean what Plato (via Callicles) would suggest it means: ambition, greed, or self-aggrandizement. Isocrates is not Gordon Gecko, arguing that greed is good. Rather, it means:

men who take advantage of the good and not the evil things in life… who pursue and practice those studies which will enable us to govern wisely both our households and the commonwealth. (Antidosis, 343)

I think you can see how that second passage resonates with the Haskins quote. And, altogether, how Isocrates and Lanham might have quite a bit in common.

Let’s Try Something

I’ve said a few times that rhetoric is about embracing complexity. Let’s see how that goes. We have until about 10:20 to work on this.

So last week a thing happened.

Then, a thing happened in response to the thing.

I want to conduct a rhetorical analysis of a response to the response to the thing.

I’ve listened to the response once. Today, in live time, I/we are going to try and track the complexity here. That complexity lies in the density of enthymemes tied to different identifications. Let’s see if this will work.

For Next Class

Read Readings, University in Ruins, chapter 2. Find and print a copy of your major’s mission statement.

FINAL PAPERS are due Saturday at midnight. Get them done.

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ENG 201 8.T: Rock Foundation Project

Today’s Plan:

  • Trick or Tweet Goes Live
  • Karsh and Fox review
  • Rock Foundation Project

Trick or Tweet Goes Live

Let’s talk about writing an email.

Karsh and Fox Review

Sections:

  1. How Do I Know if I Need a Grant? 16-18
  2. Who Funds Grants? 18-21
  3. How Do You Find the Right Foundation? 21-23
  4. Approaching Foundations? 23-24
  5. Federal Grants 25-29
  6. Tools for Finding Grants 32-34
  7. How to Read a Grant Application Package? 40-42
  8. Am I eligible? 43-45
  9. ME: 45-46, 49, 51, 53

Rock Foundation Project

This document is set to view only (for now).

How to Summarize an Academic Article

Here’s the article in question.

What should an article summary highlight?

  • Claim / purpose for research / thesis: underline any parts of the article that specify what the author(s) were attempting to prove
  • Lit Review: what previous research do the authors cite? How are they using this research? What is specifically important for their study? Is there someone here whom they are attacking?
  • Methods: What did they do? Why did they do it this way? Do they reference any sources justifying their methodology
  • How do they present their results? What are their results?
  • How do they frame the significance of their results?
  • What do they hope are the “walk aways” for their article? What are we supposed to do differently (who are we?)?

For Next Class

Read Stuart and Voyles (2016). Submit a summary to Canvas (we will work with these summaries on Thursday).

For next Tuesday, read Karsh and Fox chapters 6 & 7 (I will also give us a sample grant application to analyze via Karsch and Fox).

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ENG 201 7.R: Finishing Up the Proficiency Projects

Today’s Plan:

  • Turn Stuff into Canvas
  • Extra Credit: Monday Night
  • Let’s Look at the Social Media Calendar
  • Let’s Pick a Flyer
  • For Next Class

Review

Stuff I said I needed:

  • Where are public places (pinboards) where we can hang signs? What are University regulations for hanging signs around UNC? How can I avoid getting an email from the Dean inquiring into why my students are disregarding UNC regulations for advertising an event?
  • How many signs do we need? How many buildings on campus? How many pinboards per building? Can we hang some of these in classrooms? Can we put them in English faculty mailboxes and ask them to advertise the contest to students and/or hang them on their door?
  • We need a email draft that I can send out to every English instructor at UNC advertising the contest
  • We need copy of every email that Becca Romaine, the department’s social media expert, will send out
  • We need copy for the rules of the contest. These rules must include a line that in order to be eligible for the grand prize, you must follow UNC English and include the contest hashtag in your tweet
  • The rules have to be concise enough to fit in a tweet. We need a HHSTC image, in photoshop, with some preliminary details, to include in the tweet
  • We need a grand prize: got it, an English department sports bottle and a $10 Starbucks coffee card
  • We need a better name for this contest that Halloween Horror Story Twitter Contest
  • We need a contest hashtag that doesn’t waste too many characters
  • We need to get the contest rules, title, hashtag, etc etc etc to the Document Design team STAT

Let’s Pick a FlyerHere is a link.

For Next Class

Karsch and Fox Grant Writing, pages 15-68.

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ENG 229 7.R: Interviews, Titles

Today’s Plan:

  • Interviews Round 1
  • Interviews Round 2
  • Title Transitions
  • For next class

Interviews Round 1

Criteria for interviews:

  • Shot (rule of thirds, head room, mid shot(?))
  • Lighting
  • Sound
  • B-Roll, L/J/U cut

Let’s watch some of your submitted interviews.

Interviews Round 2

Our next project focuses on recording a two person interview–where one person asks the questions and another answers them. These are more difficult to pull off–especially because lighting two subjects can be tricky. The basic strategy involves respecting the “imaginary wall.” For this project, you will be working in groups of 3 or 4. Because this is a longer project (and worth 3x as many points as our previous work lists), I am going to give you until October 22nd to finish this. As with our first project, I want you to shoot and share footage, but I also want everyone to turn in their own finished cut.

Expectations:

  • This project needs to be 55 seconds to 1 minute long
  • This project needs a 6-12 [MAX] second introduction that includes an opening shot outside of the interview location, a b-roll montage, a title, and some intro music that fades out
  • This project needs to include text identifying participants
  • This project needs one longer response that uses a J or L cut

Given that we don’t have easy access to a shotgun or boom mic, I’m only going to assess the audio quality on the interviewee, not the interviewer.

Titles and Text in Adobe Premiere

I’ve asked you to bring your book for today. I’m going to do a quick intro tutorial, then I’ll ask you to complete your book’s chapter on Titles.

For Next Class

Complete the Creating Titles exercises. Submit a screenshot of Creating Shapes exercise.

Groups need to complete their shoots by next Thursday. Again, please upload footage to this folder. Groups should come up with a team name and make a subfolder.

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ENG 319 7.T: Shitty First Drafts

Today’s Plan:

  • Quick Write: Define Rhetoric
  • On the Importance of Shitty First Drafts
  • Paper Draft Review
  • For Next Class

Quick Write: Define Rhetoric

On the first day of class, I asked y’all to write a definition of rhetoric. Let’s try that activity again. But first, let’s took at this. And some of this. And a little bit of this.

Rhetoric concerns how humans craft and receive ideas, paying particular attention to how notions of identity and affective states influence perception and reception, how language often slips beyond agentive intention, and how to cross the divide between knowing that one should do and actually doing things.

On the Importance of Shitty First Drafts

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Paper Draft Review

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For Next Class

REVISE. Also, bring Readings’ University in Ruins to class.

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