ENG 123 10.2: Outlines, Primary Research Check, Drafting

Today’s Plan:

  • Outline
  • Primary Research Check
  • Homework: Researching, Drafting

Outline Assignment

Before the break, I asked you to brainstorm a quick outline in class. I want you to return to that outline today and flush it out a bit more, creating what we might call a “sentence outline.” I have an example here. The sentence outline does a few things:

  • It is written in complete sentences
  • The main points (roman numerals) are claims, attempts at topic sentences
  • The subpoints (letters) are evidence
  • The outline is broken into section headings

My paper has the following section headings:

  • Introduction
    • This section lays out our problem: that many writing courses eschew “creativity” because they either think teaching creativity is impossible or simply too difficult. We acknowledge that teaching creativity is painful, but necessary
    • Section 1: Postpedagogy, Creativity, and/as Disequilibrium
      • These sections provide more theoretical background–what is postpedagogy? in what ways is it a creative practice? in what ways does it “hurt” (via disequilibrium, confusion, stress) students? why is disequilibrium essential to learning?
    • Section 2: Ambiguous Constraints: Moving Towards a Postpedagogical Creative Practice
      • This section is almost like a pre-methodology section, since it describes where we did our experiment and gives an overview of our experiment
    • Section 3: Methods
      • Notice that it takes us 3 paragraphs to explain that we did a survey. And, truth be told, we could have done a better job, since we do not address the rationale behind the survey questions
    • Section 4: Findings
      • Here’s where we synthesize what we learned from our student surveys
    • Section 5: Discussion / Toward a Productive Anxiety
      • In this section we discuss how we integrate what we learned in the surveys into our ideas on creativity etc
    • Section 6: Creativity, Disequilibrium, and Assessment
      • During our review process, we were instructed to address how we grade creative projects. It was a useful request! But this section didn’t appear in our first, second, or third draft. It came later
    • Conclusion

    I am not expecting your paper will have the exact same layout as mine. But I do expect that your paper can be divided into sections that roughly follow the typical expectations for a research paper:

    • Intro
    • Section 1: Background lit
    • Section 2: Methods
    • Section 3: Findings
    • Section 4: Discussion
    • Conclusion

    Primary Research Check

    It is time to start drafting your papers–and that means it is time to complete your primary research projects. So, if you are working on a survey, then get that thing created. I recommend using Google Forms so that we can distribute the survey electronically. You are also welcome to do paper surveys. If you are doing interviews or focus groups, then make sure you have a date set and have confirmed participants. Also, make sure your questions are ready to go. If you are analyzing other materials (textbooks, websites, etc), then get your hands on those materials and get that shit done. IT IS GO TIME PEOPLE.

    Canvas Today

    I’ve made an assignment in Canvas for today. Put in there whatever you work on. If you have a survey that you want me to distribute to this class and my 329 class, then submit the link. If you need help with Google Forms, let me know. If you simply spend class working on the outline above, that’s fine too!

    Homework

    Get researching, get writing. I am hoping that you can have a draft of your paper by Monday April 2nd. That’s a little under 2 weeks. We will do the first paper peer review session next Wednesday, and I expect everyone to have five pages in class. I want a sentence outline similar to the one above by Monday. GO TIME.

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ENG 329: Just Three Things and Interviews

Today’s Plan:

  • Pre-Surveys and Materials
  • Filming Interviews Practice Run

Pre Surveys and Materials

Here’s the materials for the various groups.

Social

Clean Space

Say “No” to Chips, Cookies, and Candy

Filming Interviews

Resources:

So:

  • Select a suitable location, if possible have the subject face natural light. Avoid too much background noise. Check lighting.
  • Set up tripod. Have the phone slightly below eye level. If you have a small tripod, then use books to prop it up.
  • Put your phone into flight mode so there isn’t an interruption.
  • Clean camera lens.
  • Attach microphone; tips on how to attach a microphone.
  • Make sure your phone has enough memory space for a video.
  • Line up your shot, look for crooked lines, remember the rule of thirds, double-check lighting.
  • Set up a second camera for B-Roll; make sure it is a different angle but on the same side/angle as the original. Or you can use a second/third camera to shoot the interviewer. OR you can set up the shoot so we see the interviewer.
  • Set up a medium shot for the majority of the interview. A second camera can adjust shots between questions.
  • Set exposure to manual. Tap and hold screen until you get AE lock mode, make adjustment.
  • DO A TEST RUN. Check sound levels. Playback.
  • Instruct your subject to look straight down the camera lens so they are talking to the viewer (and not directly to you).
  • Instruct your subject to leave a few seconds before they start answering questions to make it easier for you to edit.
  • Wait a few seconds before you end the video so that you have time for a fade out or other effect in post.
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ENG 123 8.3: Extra Credit and Outline

Today’s Plan:

  • Extra Credit
  • Outline

Extra Credit

Here’s the materials for the various groups.

Social

Clean Space

Say “No” to Chips, Cookies, and Candy

Outlining

I put together a template for the outline.

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ENG 123 8.2: Primary Research Materials (Again)

Today’s Plan:

  • Extra Credit Opportunities
  • Revising Primary Materials
  • Writing Minor

Extra Credit Opportunities

I’ve put together a Google Doc. Let’s watch some videos.

Note: if you want to do the Social Event group, then consider attending the Rosenberry Writer’s Conference tonight to hear poet Khadijah Queen as your first event.

Revising Primary Materials

With the time remaining in class, I would like you to continue working on the primary research materials you started last week.

Note: if you are doing a survey or an interview, you might want to draft the email you plan on sending or the introduction to the survey. Let’s look at a study I am working on.

Note: if you are not planning on using these materials, then spend the time today reading a new research article and submit a brief annotation of the article to Canvas in place of primary research materials.

Police people–let’s talk/share.

Writing Minor

I want to encourage all of you to minor in writing! The minor is 6 courses, including at least one creative writing course and one professional writing course. We also have an internship program. Fall 2018 classes include:

  • ENG 220 Writing as Change
  • ENG 243 CW: Screen Writing
  • ENG 244 CW: Poetry
  • ENG 319: Writing and Rhetorical Theory (Art of Persuasion)

Homework

In Friday’s class we will work on outlining your paper.

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ENG 123 8.3: Primary Research Materials

Today’s Plan:

  • Attendance
  • A Few Missing Proposals
  • Primary Research
  • Homework

Primary Research Materials

I want you to take some time in class today to work on developing primary research materials. So, if you are planning an interview, survey, or focus group, then start drafting specific questions. For focus groups, start identifying potential locations–where can you hold your session? Identify who you can interview. Draft the “invitation” or contact email. If you need to interview an expert, then find one who is locally available. Etc. I want to review materials before you hit “send.”

I want you to begin by reviewing:

I’ll give you 8 minutes to read, and then 10 minutes to write. Then you will peer review each other’s materials, focusing on question quality. Remember that, regardless of research method, we are looking to avoid bias, avoid leading questions, avoid double-barreled questions, and compose clear, accessible questions. I’ll give you about 8 minutes to peer review, and then 8 minutes to revise materials and submit them to Canvas (Primary Resource Materials Drafting March 2nd).

Homework

Remember that the annotated bibliography is due on Monday.

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ENG 329 8.2: Developing User Feedback Forms

Today’s Plan:

  • IRB/Participant Awareness
  • Checking in on videos
  • Friday’s Class
  • Developing Feedback forms
  • Developing Surveys
  • Friday’s Class

Developing Feedback Forms/Methods

Today’s class should build on the work you did last week. I want your groups to nail down precisely what you need from participants. Use the IRB form I shared with you (and the UNC IRB guide) as a kind of template. If you are using intro and exit surveys, then develop those in class today. I would like you to have all of these materials ready to distribute in next Wednesday’s class. That way, we can all start our 30 day experiments on Thursday, March 8th. The experiments will run through Friday April 6th.

As you have seen, I use Google Forms for surveys. There are other options out there. I link Google Forms because they are pretty easy to use, and they store the findings in your google drive.

Developing Surveys

Because I anticipate that all the groups will develop surveys, I want to talk a bit about survey design.

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ENG 123 8.2: Annotated Bibliography

Annotated Bibliography

I have moved the deadline for the completed annotated bibliography to Monday, March 5th. Note that this is an individual, not group assignment.

Let’s revisit my expectations from the assignment:

On March 2nd, you will provide me an individual annotated bibliography, formatted in APA format. The primary aim of this assignment is for me to check if you know how to format entries (margins, punctuation, capitalization, etc). This should simply be a copy and paste of work you have been doing all semester. The annotations on this final bibliography should contain at least three paragraphs each (the complete format outlined above).

Annotated bibliographies with at least 5 entries will qualify for a C
Annotated bibliographies with at least 7 entries will qualify for a B
Annotated bibliographies with at least 9 entries will qualify for an A
9 entries should not be an issue for those of you who have kept up with the work this semester. If you have fallen behind, then this provides you an opportunity to catch up.

In addition to the entries, the annotated bibliography should open with a 400-500 word introduction. The introduction should extend and elaborate on your research synthesis from the proposal project. How can you categorize this research? Think of the categories I presented in the proposal assignment:

  • Research that shows there is a problem, What is causing the problem?
  • Research that measures the public’s perception (or lack thereof) of the problem
  • Research that offers solutions to the problem
    • What kinds of solutions?
    • Research from which you can steal methodology for your primary research

    This could be an outline / paragraph format for your introduction.

    As a reminder, annotations should have 3 paragraphs:

    • Paragraph One: the first paragraph covers the purpose, findings, and recommendations of the article
    • Paragraph Two: the second paragraph details the methods, including how many subjects were in the study, how subjects were found, the location of the study (if relevant), the length of the study, how data was analyzed/synthesized, and any other significant details
    • Paragraph Three: the third paragraph does some thinking by connecting the article to other research (this thinking can compare or contrast). This is the hardest part, since unlike the other paragraphs you are called upon to invent material rather than simply summarize it. This is also the part that helps you begin to write the research paper
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ENG 329 7.2: Project Three, Just One Thing

Today’s Plan:

  • Just One Thing Project
  • Informed Consent
  • Team Formation

Project Three: Just One Thing

Today we officially start our third project, what I term the “Just One Thing” project. This is a longitudinal project that we will be working on, in parts, from now until the end of the semester.

Outline of the stages of the project:

  • Element One: Advocacy Video
  • Element Two: Develop Data Collection Form and Logs
  • Element Three: User Test Phase and Logs
  • Element Four: Collect User Feedback via the Data Collection Form with Memo
  • Element Five: Advocacy Video Reshoot

Advocacy Video
As we’ve previously discussed, the first part of the project asks that you develop a short, let’s say 45 seconds to one minute, video advocating for how a small change to someone’s daily routine can have a major impact on their individual life and/or our collective world.

Because we are working on a short timeline, I am going to keep my expectations for the advocacy video pretty low. Here’s my idea:

  • Sign out the library media room for a couple days next week
  • “Green Screen” a video shoot in the library
  • Record audio in the library
  • Shoot about 3 minutes of video to use as cutaway (establishing shot, wide shot of campus, shots of where your One Thing happens)
  • Mix that stuff together, with a title screen, some text on screen,
    and some quick end credits

By shooting in the library we control environmental variables.

Develop Data Collection Form / User Test Phase
Once you develop videos, it will be time to recruit research subjects. Surprise–you are all each others’ research subjects. This means that every person will test the “Just One Thing” recommendation suggested by the other groups.

In order for this test to be meaningful, groups will need a way of collecting information. Keep this in mind as you choose and design your topic–how can we collect information and demonstrate potential progress. For instance, I gave the example of the lights in the bathroom. One way to test that is to use electricity bills. Obviously, we want to protect people’s personal information, so the proposed measurements cannot be too intrusive.

Next week you will prepare a Google Form to distribute to those folks not in your group–the form should collect this information. It might request supporting documents, like electricity bills. It should also ask for some kind of “log” that follows progress. Finally, it should have some open-ended questions to solicit attitudes and feedback.

User Feedback Memo

Users will test your proposed “Just One Thing” for 30 days, filling out your Google Form and providing any necessary documentation. At the end of 30 days, your team will synthesize all the data the other 6 users provide into a memo (holy crap, you will actually write words in a professional writing class). The memo will also lay out your ideas for the the final element of the project, the Advocacy Video Reshoot

Advocacy Video Reshoot

The final stage of the project. You will develop storyboards for your video and present them to the class. The class will critique the proposed plan and provide feedback. You will then write a memo discussing how the creative presentation influenced your approach to the reshoot. You will then reshoot the video, pulling out all the stops!

Just One Thing Topics

As I mentioned last class, the Joe Smith TED video can serve as a guide for thinking about your first advocacy video. Not necessarily the form (you should do something more interesting than just standing on a stage and talking), but the content. Your first video should reflect some research on your part–give us some quantitative justification for why your proposed change would matter.

That’s what I would like each group to have worked out for Friday’s class. I think the easiest way to do this is for each group to set up a Google Doc with team members, and to share that document with my gmail address: insignificantwrangler at gmail dot com. Have that set up by the end of class today.

But before we get into teams, I want to give everyone time to think of a proposed change. I’ll give you ten minutes to work on this, then we will gather and talk.

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ENG 123 7.2: Focus Groups

Today’s Plan:

  • Focus Groups
  • Homework

Focus Groups

Today I want to spend some time exploring focus groups. Focus groups can come in one of two generic flavors–either simple question/response (more common) or activity-based (less common). The value of a focus group lies in collecting a variety of perspectives *and* recording how people react to the ideas/opinions/experiences of other people. There is something unpredictably inventive, or choric, about the kind of dynamic conversations that focus groups can prompt.

  • Group size: 3-5, 6-8
  • Record discussion, assistant moderator takes notes
  • Generate an outline and a “script” of questions
    • Welcome
    • Overview of Topic
    • Ground Rules
    • First Question
  • Sample questions / activities
  • How to synthesize data

Let’s start by walking through this guide to focus groups by Richard Krueger.

Outside of academia, focus groups are generally used by marketing researchers.

You will also encounter focus groups in local journalism and political research

Homework

Your next research article.

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ENG 123 7.1: On to Annotations

Today’s Plan:

  • Research Annotations
  • Writing Research Interviews
  • Homework

Research Annotations

Between now and Monday, March 5th, I will ask you to read and write about 5 scholarly research articles. After reading these articles, you will do 2 things:

  • Add the article (in alphabetical order and in APA format) to your Group Annotated Bibliography, including paragraph #1 (see below)
  • Post the complete annotation of the article to Canvas [submit as text entry]

To review, a research annotation should have at least three paragraphs. It can have more. I expect annotations to reflect 30-45 minutes of writing time.

  • Paragraph One: the first paragraph covers the purpose, findings, and recommendations of the article
  • Paragraph Two: the second paragraph details the methods, including how many subjects were in the study, how subjects were found, the location of the study (if relevant), the length of the study, how data was analyzed/synthesized, and any other significant details
  • Paragraph Three: the third paragraph does some thinking by connecting the article to other research (this thinking can compare or contrast). This is the hardest part, since unlike the other paragraphs you are called upon to invent material rather than simply summarize it. This is also the part that helps you begin to write the research paper

Also, as you write, be thinking about the kinds of research I identified during the proposal process, and about my idea that a research paper is often a narrative, a kind of play. For instance:

  • Act One: there is a problem
  • Act Two: other people who have tried to solve the problem
  • Act Three: a brand new approach to solving the problem

Or:

  • Act One: there is a problem
  • Act Two: the is a mystery about what is causing the problem
  • Act Three: One potential cause (and some folks who think this cause is wrong)
  • Act Four: A second potential cause (and some folks who think this cause is wrong)
  • Act Five: A third potential cause (and why I think this cause is right)

Or:

  • Act One: scientists agree that there is a problem
  • Act Two: but the public doesn’t seem to know about this problem
  • Act Three: here’s where scientists have tried and failed to communicate the problem
  • Act Four: wherein I, the writer, attempt to communicate the problem to some people and solicit their reactions
  • Act Five: wherein I, the writer, make recommendations, based on Act four, for how we might better communicate the problem
  • Or:

    • Act One: there is a problem
    • Act Two: scientists have offered various suggestions for how to fix the problem
    • Act Three: I, the writer, interview people and see if they know about / what they think about / why they (dis)like the potential solution
    • Act Four: based on my research, I, the writer, suggest which of the suggestions reviewed in Act two are most likely to work

    Ok, let me be clear about this: the list of outlines above is not exhaustive. You might end up writing a paper that looks different. But I hope this list helps you reflect, as you are researching, on how the material you are working with could be arranged. Invention and arrangement go hand in hand.

    On March 2nd, you will provide me an individual annotated bibliography, formatted in APA format. The primary aim of this assignment is for me to check if you know how to format entries (margins, punctuation, capitalization, etc). This should simply be a copy and paste of work you have been doing all semester. The annotations on this final bibliography should contain at least three paragraphs each (the complete format outlined above).

    • Annotated bibliographies with at least 5 entries will qualify for a C
    • Annotated bibliographies with at least 7 entries will qualify for a B
    • Annotated bibliographies with at least 9 entries will qualify for an A

    9 entries should not be an issue for those of you who have kept up with the work this semester. If you have fallen behind, then this provides you an opportunity to catch up.

    Writing Research Interviews

    Let’s take a look at a few guides:

    Homework

    Get started on the first annotation, due Wednesday.

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