ENG 122 11.F: Proposals, Academic vs Technical Writing

Today’s Plan:

  • Library on Monday
  • Review: What are we doing right now?
  • Proposal Project
  • Academic vs. Technical Writing

Library on Monday

We’re at a point now where I hope all of you have at least one peer-reviewed, academic article to read for the final paper (see more below). Make sure you look at my feedback on your Tues, Oct 23rd Self Assessment and Article Revision. That’s where I put my recommendations for scholarship.

I wanted to go over two tools I use for research:

We are meeting at the library, in room 303, on Monday. Librarian Stephanie Evers will give a more thorough presentation on locating academic sources using the library’s Summons system.

What Are We Doing Right Now?

Big picture: up to this point in the semester, you’ve been writing articles for medium.com. You’ve written four of them. The average length of these articles is around 700 words.

Now you are going to select one of them and expand it into an academic research paper. Chances are the material from your original argument will help you show there is a problem. Or it will help you generate a question. Now we are going to consult expert research on your question or problem. The end goal is paper of around 1800-2000 words.

On Monday, I covered strategies for reading dense academic arguments and discourse. On Wednesday, I got into a whirlwind regarding Corder, listening, ethics, and alterity and ended class without really going over the homework, so I am extending the due date on that homework until Monday.

Starting Wednesday of next week, I’ll be meeting with you to talk about your proposals and see if there’s anything you need as you begin drafting your papers.

Proposal Project

Your proposals are due Tuesday, November 6th, at midnight. Here is a link to the proposal template.

Upcoming Schedule

Below is a modified version of the schedule I shared last Friday. All conferences are in my office, Ross Hall, 1180D.

  • Friday, Nov 1st: Introduce Proposal Project and Academic Reading
  • Monday, Nov 5th: Library Meetings
  • Wednesday, Nov 7th: Proposals Due Conferences
  • Thursday, Nov 8th: Conferences
  • Friday, Nov 9th: Conferences
  • Monday, Nov 12th: MLA/APA citation
  • Wednesday, Nov 14th: Creating a multimedia presentation
  • Friday, Nov 16th: Complete academic research paper due in class for peer review
  • Monday, Nov 19th: Optional class. Complete drafts of final paper due to me by Tuesday, Nov 20th at midnight
  • Monday, Nov 26th Review: creating a multimedia presentation
  • Wednesday, Nov 28th: Presentations #1-10
  • Friday, Nov 30th: Presentations #11-20
  • Monday Dec 3rd – Friday Dec 7th: Office hours availability to discuss revisions. Final papers are due Friday Dec 7th at 11:00am.

Quick Hit: Qualifying and Argument

Unfortunately, a lot of argumentation on TV and the Internet these days is framed in black and white. One side is right. One side is wrong. One approach is right. One approach is wrong. It makes for entertaining banter. But it isn’t how the world works.

Problems in the world require nuance, compromise, and are almost always colored gray. As researchers, you want to be sure you are qualifying your claims (acknowledging their limitations). In her fourth article, McKayla composed the following paragraph:

Homework in the lower grade levels (elementary school) is proven to have no benefits for the younger students. In the article “The great homework debate,” Christina Tynan-Wood states that the younger students aren’t developmentally ready for the work habits and time management skills that homework is suppose to teach. Alfie Kohn writes in his book “The Homework Myth: Why Our Kids Get Too Much of a Bad Thing” that homework in elementary school actually pushes students away from learning rather than improve academic performance. These topics are well proven that homework in elementary school has no benefits, because the studies show no impact only confusion in the kids.

Notice the first line–“is proven.” “Proven” gets repeated in the last line. That means that there is no researcher anywhere in the universe that would question this position. Which means that if I can go to Google Scholar or wherever and find one article arguing against the idea–in this case, one article arguing that there is even a fringe benefit to homework for elementary school students–then your whole argument comes under question. It likely falls apart.

McKayla needs to qualify this argument. Watch what happens if I make a few little changes:

Research suggests that homework in the lower grade levels, particularly elementary school, has negligible benefits for younger students. In the article “The great homework debate,” Christina Tynan-Wood states that the younger students aren’t developmentally ready for the work habits and time management skills that homework is suppose to teach. Alfie Kohn writes in his book “The Homework Myth: Why Our Kids Get Too Much of a Bad Thing” that homework in elementary school actually pushes students away from learning rather than improve academic performance. Students’ lack of intellectual development and the boring monotony of homework likely make excessive homework do more harm than good to academic achievement and growth.

Homework

If you didn’t complete your Academic Research Summary #1, please do. Then get to work on your proposal.

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ENG 201 11.R: Grant Writing Deliverables

Today’s Plan:

  • Grant Writing Workspace
  • Homework

Grant Writing Workspace

Let’s get back to work. I think we are ready to polish up and deliver. Maybe.

  • Edit my project descriptions to under 1000k words
  • Revise Media Profile section
  • Discuss Implementation or Strategic Planning

Homework

Read ABO 484-502 on resumes.

Submit a resume to Canvas by noon on Tuesday.

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ENG 122 11.W: Corder, Argument, and Listening as Love

Today’s Plan:

  • Corder
  • Homework

Corder

Before we get started, I want you to think about the last time times you really disagreed with someone on anything significant. Any level of significance. Not like “where should we eat dinner.” But something at which something was at stake. Something where you were qualified as upset, irritated, or angry. Something that concerned who you are (not what you can do), right or wrong. Morality.

I’ve set up a space in Canvas for you to freewrite about it. Your freewrite can address any of the following questions. Then there is a second question.

  • How long did it take you to think of something?
  • Are you friends with the person? Relatives? Or are they outside your normal circle?
  • Did the disagreement happen face-to-face? Online?
  • Looking back, would you change your position? If you talked about the disagreement again, do you think they might change theirs?
  • When was the last time you really believed something and then changed your mind and believed something else?

Corder Summaries

In groups I’d like you to discuss the following questions:

  • Group One: [sections 1-3]: What does Corder mean by the idea that we make narratives? Why do said narratives complicate traditional notions of argument and rhetoric?
  • Group Two: [sections 4-6]: How can we describe Rogerian method? Why is Corder skeptical that such a method can be useful to rhetoric?
  • Group Three: [section 6-7]: Looking at section 7, would your frame Corder as an optimist or pessimist? What do “we” have to learn (and who are the “we” of this section’s final paragraphs)?
  • Group Four: [Section 8]:What do we make of section 8? Why is this story here? What does it exemplify or reinforce?
  • Group Five: [Section 9]: What does it mean to be “perpetually opening and closing” (29)? How can such a position help us be better? How does it tie to the other advice offered in this section?

Jim Corder, “Argument as Emergence, Rhetoric as Love” as the Grounds for a Rhetoric Other than Persuasion

I think somewhere in the end of last class I announced that Corder’s essay is one of my favorite essays ever. It is. It had an incredible impact on my career. At this point I cannot even remember when in graduate school I read it for the first time. But just about everything I’ve written since–and especially anything having to do with the purpose, study, or teaching of rhetoric–is haunted by it. My dissertation focused on the ethics of Emmanuel Levinas, but my reading of Levinas (and other theorists such as Alphonso Lingis, Julia Kristeva, and Adriana Cavarero) is likely overdetermined by my investment in the questions Corder raises in this essay. I say questions because I think in many ways it raises more questions than it answers. Corder’s explication of narratives, which I read as a neutralizing of “ideology,” is meant to deconstruct traditional notions of argument–the idea that argument is about an emotionless passing of information between rational, open, and willing participants.

In order to better understand what questions it raises, and how it deconstructs traditional argument, I want to establish three important elements of rhetoric.

First, unlike Platonic philosophy and the modern Enlightenment it helps buttress, rhetoric doesn’t think of argument or language as purely rational. Terms are not neutral conveyors of meaning. I want to mention Kenneth Burke’s essay on “Terministic Screens,” particularly, Burke’s idea that terms often capture “attitudes.” Terms can think for us, though this thinking isn’t necessarily in the conscious mind, but in the subconscious one. Words carry history and associations. If you aren’t “pro-life” then you must be “pro-death.” To attend to rhetoric is to bring language’s subconscious elements to the surface, to call attention to the ways in which language thinks for us, affects us, even when we might not be aware of it. That is, rhetoric disrupts our normal communicative economy (information) by asking questions about exchange rates (affect).

Second, again recalling Burke, language does more than simply convey information. Language acts. Language is symbolic action. As Burke writes in Permanence and Change, “words are fists.” Or, at least, they can be. They can strike us. They can disarm us. But they can do more than that. The point to remember here is that language is never simply transmitting knowledge (logos). Language always hits a target–again, it is affective, or pathetic. There is no utterance that does not touch upon our emotions. Philosophy, in the tradition of Plato, has long defined itself as a discipline that filters emotion out. Emotion is noise that gets in the way of the Truth (logos). Rhetoric thinks emotion (pathos) otherwise. We experience the world in moods (Heidegger calls them), whether conscious (as emotion) or subconscious (as affect, or feelings that register and shape our consciousness).

Third, rhetoric approaches all language as political. Language unfolds in a network of relations–a world in a process of dividing itself between “us” and “them.” Worlds of competing narratives, frames, ideologies, cultures, moralities. Words are fists, and, as the theorists Francois Lyotard reminds us, “to speak is to fight.” Every utterance traces itself through those narratives. Every utterance can be read across whether the speaker is one of us or one of them. Every utterance is a strike against someone. All those hits pile up.

There is no utterance that does not hit upon another and, at the very least, make a demand of her time and attention. Such demands are taxing, and part of any rhetoric dedicated to the political (in either the broader sense of the social I have traced here or even its more common everyday sense of civic deliberation and government) has to account for the difficulty we face just trying to pay attention. In the Internet age, it has to count doubly–taking into the account the ever increasing rate at which difference is thrown at us. Filter bubbles might limit our actual contact with difference–but we know it is there. Right there. Ready to comment or critique or challenge or destroy us. It lingers, threatening our rational ownership of the world with its irrational, crazy, impossible narratives. So different than ours. So dangerous.

This difficulty, this sense of danger and dread, is amplified by our innate allergy to alterity, to difference. This, I believe, is the incredibly important conclusion articulated by Corder–Corder realizes that our desire for similitude, certainty, and safety cannot be pushed aside in the name of “objectivity” or “rationality.” Victor Vitanza, in his attempt to fuse ancient sophistry with contemporary philosophy (particularly Nietzsche and Derrida), writes:

My position is […] that we are not at home in our world/whirl of language. Any and every attempt to assume that we are has or will have created for human beings dangerous situations. (Negation, Subjectivity, and the History of Rhetoric, 157).

Why dangerous? Because we are so quick to silence or kill anything that threatens our “home,” our narrative, our fragile collective identity that tells us who we are, how the world should work, and what is the purpose of our life and struggle. Another narrative, a different face, an “other” puts all those homes in a whirl. The desire to end the whirl, to find ourselves standing on solid, unquestionable ground, explains for me why people will often ignore research and evidence that contradicts an ideological narrative. It explains why pizza owners in Indiana won’t serve LGBTQ weddings, and why Americans will donate nearly a million dollar to said owners in support. In the social sciences, such a tendency is termed “confirmation bias.” To anticipate my conclusion, I want to suggest that addressing confirmation bias requires more than addressing means of interpretation. It requires we craft a subject with the emotional capacity requisite to develop “a will to interpret otherwise.”

And this, for me, marks off the province of 21st century rhetoric and the scope of Corder’s questions. We are aware of all these things: language’s ability to subconsciously strike at any notion of difference or otherness, and our human–all too human–desire for Perfection. Simplicity. Unity. Certainty. Truth. These terms are not innocent. We must learn to hear them. In the age of digital cacophony, rhetoric is the discipline that cultivates civic subjects willing to listen. To attend to difference. To eschew the safe and the simple for something more messy, complicated, and–ultimately–ethical.

Corder arms us with a better recognition of how and why arguments get heated. Because arguments aren’t something people have. Arguments are what we are. I stand here as an argument for how a human should be. My being is my argument for itself. My comfort with myself, as a being, is rooted in being comfortable with myself. I might rely on external elements to support the righteous of my being. The Bible. The Constitution. Plato. Nietzsche. Plath. Seinfeld. Simpsons. Whatever. But, ultimately, I would argue that no matter the depth of our faith in the righteousness of such external elements we are haunted–as Vitanza puts it–by a (sub)conscious knowledge that such elements are not, in the words of Derrida, “assured.” And when someone approaches who doesn’t fit into the shape of the external–their square won’t fit in my circular hole–they produce an agitation at the core of my being. Their very existence is a challenge to my fundamental ontology. The are “other.” Of course, Corder doesn’t use this kind of language–but this is how I understand his argument that we are arguments. To understand that our natural inclinations are to divide–in its ugliest forms–to hate the difference that causes the contours of our identity to emerge. We see our own frailties and uncertainties only when confronted by an other who thinks or speaks or acts otherwise. That’s what Corder means when he frames argument as emergence. And he dreams of the possibility of cultivating a rhetoric that works against that natural inclination–that aims at embrace. That begins with “love.”

His question, as I understand it, is to ask how we can better train people to repress the urge to slay the other for the fact of her otherness. His answer is to provide “time.” One has to wonder if the acceleration of the digital–the way it spends up communication and thought– has contributed to the toxic political environment in which we now dwell. How can we slow down? These are the questions I attribute to Corder. These are the questions that my own scholarship has attempted to answer. I don’t think I’ve done a great job.

But scholarship isn’t always about solving a problem. Often it is about exploring a problem, recognizing it. More often, it is simply about getting others to see your problem, to pull them to it. To give your problem gravity. Bruno Latour argues something is real only in so much that it impacts others–that we can trace connections and effects. Scholarship, then, can be seen as the attempt to collect and assemble more actants in your problem’s network.

This semester, then, has been my attempt to recruit you to my cause–even if temporarily. To the question of how, or if, but certainly why, we need to learn to practice listening as I have worked to describe it. Listening, not in terms of waiting to speak, waiting to persuade, respond, counter-argument. Not in the Platonic/Aristotelian tradition of agonism and dialectic: we aren’t necessarily listening to change the other. Rather listening in terms of what Corder prioritizes–as taking the time to reflect inwardly before lashing outwardly. Learning to listen with a willingness to change ourselves.

In short, we must learn to hear our own desire for perfection, simplicity, unity, certainty, truth. And we must educate ourselves such that we don’t allow these desires to dominate the way we interact with others. Rhetoric is particularly suited to such a task, since its historical mission has been to conceptualize and predict the ways in which different audiences might interpret a particular message.

I am not an Idealist here. Conceptualizing rhetoric as listening isn’t a utopian proposal. It is not a means to ending the interminable wrangle of the marketplace. This does not mean we live in a world without argument or debate. This doesn’t mean we cannot criticize others. But it does mean that we must take the time to listen to other positions, to resist the immediate impulse to attack and tear down, to try to identify possible starting places for cooperation. There will be times when there are none. There will be times when our opponents steadfastly refuse to extend us an ear. We will be tempted to stop listening.

I will not pretend that I offer a solution for how to “fix” these impasses. But I will say, quite frankly, that I worry for the future of our government, our fragile democracy, when I see a generation of politicians, and Americans, who seem so disinclined to attend to other opinions. Other narratives. Other possibilities. It is our task, as rhetoricians, to open this problem, to broadcast it, to insist upon better media, better politicians, better schools, that acknowledge the necessity of listening, of encountering difference, rather than obfuscating, synthesizing, silencing, or ignoring it.

My dedication to thinking rhetoric as listening, and to think of listening in terms of ethics stems from my firm belief in the failure of the Enlightenment ideal (particularly the one introduced to us by Kant): the commitment that knowledge, and the gradual progression of knowledge, is sufficient to solve our human (and, of course, non-human) problems. I do not believe this to be so. For it does not address the most obvious question: how do we persuade someone to listen to knowledge? How do we cultivate a citizen, a self, willing to listen, to consider, to change? Those are not rhetorical questions, but rather the questions that drive my dedication to rhetoric.

One other thought: an anecdote from the last time I taught Corder that still troubles me (tied to Corder’s idea that “any statement carries its history with it” (17).

Homework

For homework I’d like you to write an thorough summary of an academic, peer-reviewed research article that can contribute to your final paper. Use the framework from last class as a guide for your write up:

  • Pass One–see the framework–Begin by reading the abstract, introduction, and conclusion. Look at any tables, diagrams, and/or illustrations. Have an overall sense of the argument.
  • In or near the conclusion, look for where the writer(s) advocate(s) for us to do something differently; what does she perceive as the impact of this research?
  • Can you summarize the paper in a sentence or two in your own words?
  • Pass Two–
  • Highlight and annotate as you go. Look for keywords that indicate findings. Try to identify what problem the article hopes to address
  • Especially when working with research, make note of the methodology. Was it a survey? An experiment? Was it qualitative research (textual analysis), or more quantitative (measurement)? When working with scholarship, pay attention to the theorists or scholars the author uses to support her argument.
  • Pass Three–Can I answer all of the following questions?:
    • What are the central arguments in the article?
    • How did they collect their evidence?
    • What does their evidence say?
    • Why is the article important?
    • What recommendations do the authors make?
    • After reading this research, what recommendations can I make?
    • How does the article contribute to my field of study, my present research?
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ENG 122 11.M: Reading Academic Research

Today’s Plan:

  • Strategies for Reading Academic Research
  • Sample Article #1:
  • Sample Article #2:
  • Homework

Strategies for Reading Academic Research

This week we pivot from writing articles on medium.com to planning and researching the academic research paper. I’ve already suggested some promising research to most of you. Now comes the challenging part–reading and digesting that material.

There’s a lot of jokes out there about the nature of academic research–why is it so difficult? Is this even English? Etc. Some of these chides are well-earned. But the thing to remember here is that academic vocabularies and styles develop over long periods of time. The more people study a particular problem, the more precise and deep meanings become.

Whatever your field, you will encounter these precise vocabularies. At first encounter, the prose can be daunting and appear almost impenetrable. My focus these next few weeks is to help acclimate you to academic discourse, to help you wade in to the kind of material that you will encounter over the next few years. Learning to read complex research in a short amount of time is a hard skill, but it is important to learn how to read it strategically. Likewise, it can be quite difficult to condense a 20-page article into a few paragraphs, and certainly the I have collected a few readings that should help us do this.

From these, we can synthesize a few general rules:

  • Pass One–see the framework–Begin by reading the abstract, introduction, and conclusion. Look at any tables, diagrams, and/or illustrations. Have an overall sense of the argument.
  • In or near the conclusion, look for where the writer(s) advocate(s) for us to do something differently; what does she perceive as the impact of this research?
  • Can you summarize the paper in a sentence or two in your own words?
  • Pass Two–
  • Highlight and annotate as you go. Look for keywords that indicate findings. Try to identify what problem the article hopes to address
  • Especially when working with research, make note of the methodology. Was it a survey? An experiment? Was it qualitative research (textual analysis), or more quantitative (measurement)? When working with scholarship, pay attention to the theorists or scholars the author uses to support her argument.
  • Pass Three–Can I answer all of the following questions?:
    • What are the central arguments in the article?
    • How did they collect their evidence?
    • What does their evidence say?
    • Why is the article important?
    • What recommendations do the authors make?
    • After reading this research, what recommendations can I make?
    • How does the article contribute to my field of study, my present research?

Stewart, Arif, and Starbird (2018) detail how russian trolls inflamed arguments regarding police shootings in America by creating and retweeting highly partisan, inflamatory statements. They analyzed almost 249k tweets from 160k accounts and found that over 91% could be classified as either leans-left or leans-right. They chart how many of the top hash-tags and tweets from each leaning were produced or boosted by russian agents. Their analysis reinforces research on how filter bubbles are increasingly plaguing American political discourse: they find that troll activity “primarily circulates within and not across” political leanings (pp. 5).

At first, it might take you an hour to go through three passes of a typical 25 page academic article. It might take you two hours. With practice and experience, you will likely be able to cut those times down dramatically. But I want to stress that academic reading takes a lot more time than reading a medium.com post. When doing research, set plenty of time aside and be sure to write–DON’T JUST READ!

Sample #1

Sample #2

Food for Thought.

Homework

In class today we examined an example of research. For homework, I’d like to examine a more scholarly article–Jim Corder’s article “Argument as Emergence, Rhetoric as Love.” As scholarship goes, I think you would be hard-pressed to find a more readable, accessible argument than Corder’s. But I think Corder’s work should be required reading for our current political times.

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ENG 201 10.T: Moving Forward with the Grant Project

Today’s Plan

  • Unpacking Officer Ries’ Visit
  • Mapping out the next two weeks
  • Homework

Unpacking Officer Ries’ Visit

I thought our meeting with Officer Ries was incredibly productive and I’ve got some notes to share, but first I am curious to hear what you remember, what stuck out.

Mapping Out the Next Two Weeks

What has to get done:

  • Making sense of the financial data (Sydney)
  • Collecting demographic information on Greeley [Build need] Holly and Taylor
  • Email to Officer Ries clarifying ongoing partnerships (can glean info from tax return) (Seth)
  • Compiling media profile of Santa Cops program (statewide and here in Greeley–obviously the Tribune; any TV coverage? Denver Post? Other local newspapers?) (Jason)
  • Finalizing grant targets:
    • Inkind (Build a Bear) (Carl)
    • Mabel Y. Hughes (Erika)
    • Community Possible US Bank (Caitlin)
    • Max and Victoria Dreyfus Foundation (Katrina)
    • Singing for Change (Brenna)
    • Joseph Henry Edmundson Foundation (Molly)
    • Anschutz Family Foundation (Joseph)

So, who wants to do what? What is a fair and equitable way to split up labor?

Can we have the material above prepared? When an we do revising/editing sessions?

Let’s work on grants in here.

Homework

Read Karsh and Fox Lesson 7 “Identifying and Documenting the Need.”

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ENG 122 10.M: Article #4, Upcoming Schedule

Today’s Plan:

  • Review
  • Article #4
  • Upcoming Schedule
  • Homework

Review

I wanted to open today highlighting what I consider to be the most important things we have covered in class this semester.

  • Does your article have a clear claim?
  • Are your paragraphs driven by ideas?
  • One idea per paragraph?
  • Do the last sentences in your paragraphs make it clear how the whole paragraph supports the overarching claim?
  • Do you transition into sources?
  • When you bring in a source, do you provide context/ethos for it:
    • When was it published?
    • What was its purpose(s)?
    • What was its evidence?
    • What methods did it use to get its evidence?
    • What conclusions did it draw, what recommendations did it make?
  • Are you capable of ethically handling an opposing viewpoint, such that a reader cannot immediately identify whether you agree or disagree with that perspective/idea/argument?

While we’ve talked about other things–like establishing kairos / a shared problem in the introduction and crafting active / readable sentences–these are the foundational skills I want you to carry forward into your other classes.

Article #4

To help further develop these skills, I want you to look back at your first two articles. This week you will select one of those articles and rewrite it: adding new material, reorganizing, and improving the style.

We are going to talk about how to revisit and expand the article in class today. In terms of adding new material, let’s think about some of the following questions:

  • Do you think the argument in the first version was clear? Was it murky? Has your position on the subject changed?
  • What new things have happened since you wrote the original article?
  • What new things might you research to further develop the article? What information did you wish you had when you wrote it that you might go find?
  • Did you have an authentic/quality counter-argument in your original piece?

Upcoming Schedule

Here is how I see the next few weeks playing out:

  • Wednesday, Oct 24 (computer lab): In class I’ll have classmates read through your revision candidate.
  • Friday, Oct 26: We will workshop writing in class
  • Monday, Oct 29: I will go over the academic research assignment, including the proposal project
  • Wednesday, Oct 31: I believe we will meet in the library for research / otherwise an academic reading activity on concise writing
  • Friday, Nov 1st: Library or academic reading activity
  • Monday, Nov 5th: Proposals due
  • Wednesday, Nov 7th: Conferences
  • Thursday, Nov 8th: Conferences
  • Friday, Nov 9th: Conferences
  • Monday, Nov 12th: MLA/APA citation
  • Wednesday, Nov 14th: Creating a multimedia presentation
  • Friday, Nov 16th: Complete academic research paper due in class for peer review
  • Monday, Nov 18th: Optional class. Complete drafts of final paper due to me by Tuesday, Nov 19th at midnight
  • Monday, Nov 26th Review: creating a multimedia presentation
  • Wednesday, Nov 28th: Presentations #1-10
  • Friday, Nov 30th: Presentations #11-20
  • Monday Dec 3rd – Friday Dec 7th: Office hours availability to discuss revisions. Final papers are due Friday Dec 7th at 11:00am.

Homework

I’d like you to close read the article you have chosen to revise. Why are you revising this one? What ideas do you have? Turn our brief discussions in class today into something more concrete and directive. This exercise is meant to be inventive and generative–so spend about 10 minutes just free-writing, spitballing, letting as many ideas and thoughts pour out of your head as possible. Don’t worry about grammar, about style, about “making sense.” Just go. 

When you are done, go out and find two things that you can add to this article. Answer the following questions for each new source:

  • When was it published?
  • What was its purpose(s)?
  • Can you break the article into sections?
  • What was its evidence?
  • What methods did it use to get its evidence?
  • What conclusions did it draw, what recommendations did it make?

You’ll submit this to Canvas–“Tues, Oct 23: Article Revision Self Assessment and Research.”

Sign up for a conference time.

If none of these times work for you, let me know and we can work something out.

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ENG 122 9.M: Close Reading for Argument

Today’s Plan:

  • Quick Hits
  • Workshopping
  • Close Reading for Argument
  • Homework

Quick Hits

Character and Actions #1: Let’s trim some prepositions and include an “action” verb:

As for many teachers and students the four day weeks are already in place in districts around Colorado and other states.

Change the subject of the sentence. What is doing the action? Eliminate the prepositions (with, of):

Students’ academic performance is increasing with the new school reform of four day weeks.

Workshopping

There’s two papers I want to work with today. Both papers have real argumentative strengths, but also offer an opportunity to highlight important issues I see in a lot of papers.

Close Reading for Argument

I want to review the parts of an argument. Here’s what I shared in week four:

Let me provide another kind of training wheels–the rhetorician Cicero’s 6 parts of a speech:

  • Exordium (Introduction, the hook– something engaging to get the audience’s attention, something that sets a tone or a mood for the discussion, something that acknowledges what they might already believe and opens the space for believing something different)
  • Narratio (Narration, background information–who believes what, what aren’t we debating, what do we know, what are the facts)
  • Partitio (Partition, division–where the speaker lays out in advance the parts of her argument, gives a “roadmap” of what the listener can expect)
  • Confirmatio (Confirmation, evidence–where the speaker walks the listener through her argument step-by-step, providing and explaining evidence)
  • Refutatio (Refutation, counter-arguments–where the speaker directly addresses an opponent’s counter-arguments and anticipates other objections the audience might have)
  • Peroratio (Peroration, conclusion–where the speaker reviews her case and makes a suggestion for what the audience should do as a result of believing her, either in thought or action. What are the consequences?)

The first three parts above, Narratio, Partitio, and Confirmatio, are part of the introduction–point to an issue, set a tone, assess and shift the audience’s attitude, and lay out the parts of your argument.

Today I want to talk about Confirmatio and Refutation. Specifically, I want to work on what it means to “read” something that you plan on incorporating in a paper. So far this semester, my focus has been on the arrangement of your own writing, now I want to turn and focus attention on how well you engage the writing of others. Very often audiences are attentive to how you handle others–they are sensitive to whether you pay opponents respect or merely sweep over them. Real thought happens via close engagement.

Real engagement means you’ve read something close enough to summarize:

  • The problem the author seeks to address
  • The evidence she points to as establishing *the problem*
  • *All* the evidence she offers in defense of her position

A responsible writer will deal with these things carefully before advancing to a critique or offering a counter-position. You want to acknowledge the thought, and demonstrate that you are the kind of person who carefully acknowledges thought, before offering a rebuttal or contribution. When writing about evidence–one of the key questions concerns methodology; how did the author(s) get their evidence?

I stress this because, as I examine the third set of drafts, I see a lot of “drive-by” engagement, in which folks are reading part of an article but not doing enough work. As you move out of ENG 122 and into other classes, you will be expected to perform more diligent close readings. This is a skill I want to develop the next few weeks.

Proposition 112 sources

Homework

Go back to your drafts and expand on how you are dealing with sources. Make sure, for each source you reference, that you are thoroughly answering all three questions above.

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ENG 201 8.T: Developing Project 3

Today’s Plan:

  • Quick Gloss of Abras et al
  • Grant Project Dates
  • Developing the Grant Project
  • Grant Project Teams
  • Homework

Abras et al on UCD

A few questions:

  • What is UCD?
  • How do you do UCD?
  • How does UCD fit into the theoretical discussions of rhetoric we’ve been having all semester? That is, think of the following GRE style analogy: UCD is to X as Rhetoric is to Y

Grant Writing Project Dates

Let’s review:

  • Week 8 Oct 9 & 11: On the 9th I will introduce the new third project. In place of a documentation project, we are going to do a recommendation report. Groups of 3-4 will research 4-6 potential grants in order to identify which ones would be most useful for our client. Reports will look into past award winners, application materials, organizational history and mission, and whatever else we can come up with. Between now and October 9th I’d like you to read Karsh and Fox Lessons 2 and 3 (“What is a Grant” and “What Do Grantmakers Want?”). We’ll use that reading on the 9th to inform the recommendation report.
  • Week 9 Oct 16 & 18: Keep trucking on that report. Officer Reis will be visiting us on the 18th
  • Week 10 Oct 23 & 25: Research for the grant. Begin Drafting.
  • Week 11 Oct 30 & Nov 1: Complete drafting. Peer review.
  • Week 12 Nov 6 & 8: Revise and complete grant application.

We’ll spend weeks 13, 14, 15, and 16 focusing on the job materials project–putting together a resume and cover letter for a specific job, developing an online portfolio of written/multimodal work, and establishing a professional online network (via twitter, linkedin, etc).

Grant Writing Project Stage One: Researching Potential Grants

Between now and next Thursday our priority will be identifying which grants we should pursue as a class. You will be breaking up into teams of 3-4. Each group will examine 4-5 potential grants and write up a recommendation report that includes their group’s detailed research. Officer Ries will be visiting us next Thursday–I’ll ask each group to develop a very quick presentation and handout that identifies why this grant is the best option out of the 4-5 they examined.

So there’s two group deliverables for the first stage of Project One due by next Thursday:

  • Report
  • Presentation

In next Thursday’s class we will identify which two grants, out of the four leading candidates, we are going to pursue.

We will spend time today figuring out what needs to be in the report. Obviously time is limited, so we need to be strategic and thoughtful in where we invest our energies this next week.

There is one thing I’d like to avoid. Each group will be examining 3-4 grant applications. I want to make sure that there is collaboration–that more than one set of eyes pass over each application.

Grant Writing Report

I want to try something a bit different today, something similar to how we collaborated on the Project 1 assignment expectations. I’ve put together a new Google Doc for the grant writing project. I want you to go through the Karsh and Fox chapters and populate the sections of the Google Doc. Let’s take a look and talk about how this can work.

Homework

We will talk about this in class. I have some thoughts.

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ENG 122 8.M: Kairos and Commonplaces

Today’s Plan:

  • Article #2
  • Kairos
  • Article #3 Experiment
  • Homework

Article #2

Drafts get posted to Canvas. Articles get published to medium, and the link gets added to our Google Doc.

Kairos

So far this semester, I’ve stressed how introductions do three things. First, they introduce a problem about which “everyone” is talking (scarequotes). Second, they both clearly state a claim *and* roadmap the steps an article will take; i.e., First, this paper reviews A and B. Second it examines C. Third, it suggests D.

Today I want to discuss another element of an effective introduction, or how to affectively introduce something. That last clause is a terrible nerd joke. By the end of class, I hope you get why it is terrible. Here goes.

In his classic treaty On Rhetoric, Aristotle dedicates quite a bit of energy into the three kinds of rhetorical appeals: logos, ethos, and pathos. Let’s review.

I think most contemporary textbooks woefully mistreat pathos, which gets taught as the rhetor’s (speaker/writer) ability to generate emotion in the audience. While there are some people in rhetoric that emphasize the importance of generating emotion in order to move someone from thought to action, Aristotle isn’t one of them. Aristotle is a rationalist. His emphasis is on logos, logical argumentation. He does a terrible job with ethos (which isn’t really about “credibility” in the way Aristotle discusses). But I digress.

Aristotle’s emphasis on logos, logical argument, claims and evidence, means he is quite wary of anything that gets in the way of logical thought. Think Mr. Spock from Star Trek. That’s Aristotle’s idea citizen–someone who is able to separate emotion out of argument.

But Aristotle is also aware no one can actually do this. Maybe philosophers, like his teacher Plato can come close, but certainly not everyday (white, rich, male) citizens of Athens who are called upon to participate in democracy. They are emotional beings. They traverse the world in an always already emotional state. In fact, Aristotle’s brief comments on emotion and pathos are a driving influence behind one of the biggest philosophical movements of the 20th century–Heidegger’s phenomenology. We don’t have time for a deep dive here, but Heidegger’s response to modern philosophy was to argue that people do not simply receive the world in a neutral state, like information being loaded onto a computer, but rather exist and navigate the world from within the confines of a “mood.”

So, what does this mean for rhetors like ourselves? It means that when we come to discuss something, we have to, in Aristotle’s simple words, “prepare the judge.” We have to anticipate the emotional mood, the emotional baggage, that people will carry into that context, that situation. We have to know what else might be weighing on their mind. We have to have some sense of how others in the audience will feel. Kairos thus considers how people feel as they receive an argument. (It means more than this). To go back to my nerd joke in the introduction–in philosophy, psychology, sociology, and rhetoric, emotion is something we know we feel. We feel something consciously. Affect, however, is a feeling that resonates at a frequency below conscious recognition–it happens, in a non-sense, below or before consciousness. It contributes to the context or structure in which an “I” experiences something. Very often we will never be aware of its presence,
even though it is acting on us. Hence the terrible joke: Good writers affectively introduce us to our own affect.

Let me use an example. Friday night, during the Red Sox vs. Yankee game, color analyst Rob Darling made the following comment when Yankee’s pitcher, Japanese-born Masahiro Tanaka, struggled to throw strikes:

“A little chink in the armor for Tanaka here,” Darling said. “It’s the first inning he has lost a little of his control.”

Perhaps we need a bit more context to understand the outrage.

Let’s take a look at the introductions to a few different New York papers covering the comment and the ensuing conversations. For each of these, we can think about who the audience is and how the writer addresses, or fails to address, the complex affective network(s) underlying the conversation:

Now the three articles above are perhaps bad examples because they aren’t explicitly making an argument. They purport to report facts (although I think we can see that selecting which facts to report is itself shaping an argument). I want to compare this to a take that came across my social media, because it offers an interesting example of how to affectively establish kairos:

Some takeaways: attending to kairos is a matter of establishing ethos (identifying with the audience, forging a common identity that we can share, understanding who we are) and navigating–sometimes explicitly and sometimes more subtly, the emotional contexts in which arguments flow. These flows often become calcified into what rhetoricians call commonplaces–the first arguments we think of, the first impressions we have, when we hear about a topic.

Homework

There’s two homework assignments: first, go to the Google Doc and read one article on medium.com. I want you to ask the author an informed question on a specific part of her article in medium.com. I then want you to post in Canvas (Monday Oct 8th Peer Review): give me a paragraph summary of the article that focuses on three things–the authors claim, her evidence for proving the claim, and the final recommendation she makes. Then tell me what question you asked her.

The second homework assignment asks you to read and summarize one thing for our third article. Once again, I want you to focus on evidence. When you summarize something for your audience, you want to make sure you give them enough information to know why a source is credible. This often means summarizing both what the source specifically argues and then what it offers as evidence for that argument. I’m noticing a bit too much shallow reading in some people’s articles.

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ENG 201 7.T: Project 2 Conclusion, Williams on Characters and Actions

Today’s Plan:

  • Project Two Conclusion
  • Return to Characters and Actions
  • Homework

Completing Project 2

Thursday marks what should be the final day in your gantt chart. So it is time to report on your progress. I think the easiest way to do this is with a memo. Let’s do some brainstorming: what sections should this memo have?

Characters and Actions

Let’s talk a bit more about rhetorical grammar and how characters and actions can help writers craft clearer and more engaging sentences.

Homework

First read Karsh and Fox 15-52. This shouldn’t be a tough reading.

Then read Abras et al on User Centered Design from the Files section of Canvas. Originally, I intended this reading to ground our discussion of crafting and testing documentation.

“User-centered design” has become a centerpiece of UX (user experience) research; I’d be surprised if many of you didn’t come across either UCD or UX in job ads from Project One.

But we’re not going to be conducting a documentation project this semester–instead project 3 will focus on developing a recommendation report for our grant writing project–what grants should we pursue? what questions should we be “asking” of potential grants as we compile our research?

I’d like your forum discussion posts for Abras et al to hone in on these questions: what can attention to User Centered Design teach us about grant writing? What UCD principles should inform our research heuristic? What UCD principles should inform the way we write our grants? A grant is obviously not a product–but I do think there is valuable cross-over here.

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